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Stars Hide Your Fires (Charles/Erik, NC-17)

Jul 27, 2011 13:43

Title: Stars Hide Your Fires
Rating: NC-17
Pairing/fandom: Charles/Erik, XMFC
Word count: ~2.8K
Warnings: sexual arousal from punishment (RACK). Minor rimming and bloodplay.
Disclaimer: not mine, no profit.
a/n: for the “caning” square on my card
a/n: title fromMacbeth by way of Mumford and Sons.
a/n: many thanks to linaerys for the beta!

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Comments 17

shadowserenity July 28 2011, 18:53:38 UTC

I love how Charles is so upfront about what he wants, so assured that Erik is incapable of going too far, and of course, Charles insisting that Erik see, that it was all okay. Lovely :).

ariadnes_string July 29 2011, 03:27:11 UTC

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Charles's optimism/faith in Erik is pretty boundless--and at least in this instance, repaid :)

Thanks for reading and commenting!

archerstar July 28 2011, 18:53:49 UTC

*cough* I'll just be in my bunk.

Very well done. <3

ariadnes_string July 29 2011, 03:33:08 UTC

Thank you--I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks for reading and commenting!

soldierly July 28 2011, 20:49:42 UTC

This is so well-done. I love the undercurrent of emotion and trust, and how Charles is the one who needs it -- that's a switch-up from what we usually see. Definitely bookmarked. :3

ariadnes_string July 29 2011, 03:41:59 UTC

Thank you--I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I was kind of fascinated by Erik's conflicting feelings about his own desire to hurt--and thought there might be reasons for Charles to seek out pain--glad it worked okay--it was a little scary to write!

Thanks for reading and commenting!

frantic_allonsy July 28 2011, 22:03:59 UTC

Goodness gracious, this is so delicious and hot and wonderful, and full of emotions, and in character- I love every bit of it. Thank you!

ariadnes_string July 29 2011, 03:50:16 UTC

You are very welcome! Thank you for the lovely comment--I'm thrilled you enjoyed it (never written this kink before--eep!) and very glad it seemed in character!

Thanks for reading and commenting!

lilith_lessfair July 29 2011, 14:15:28 UTC

Terrific icon.

lilith_lessfair July 29 2011, 14:14:41 UTC

Lovely work and very true to form for both of them, I think.

ariadnes_string July 29 2011, 20:03:24 UTC

Thank you--I'm glad you enjoyed it! And especially that it seemed in character--these two are kind of elusive for me.

Thanks for reading and commenting!