Take it from the Inside (H50 fic, Steve/Danny, NC-17)

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Title: Take it from the Inside

Comments

[tailoredshirt]

Okay, bloodplay is not my kink, and I read bits of this through my fingers, but I'm glad I did. I thought the bloodplay was really well written, and Danny's desire felt real. I LOL'd at "a Jersey version of Edward Cullen." XD Also at the idea of Steve prowling like a mountain lion who'd lost his deer carcass. *pets Steve*

But guh, Danny getting jealous at seeing the scars on Steve's back was hot. And then cleaning him up after. ♥ I loved this version of an established relationship between the two of them, especially with Danny both knowing him well and not knowing him at all.

ETA: Er, I should clarify that when I said "bloodplay is not my kink" I meant that I am a bit squeamish about blood, not that I was offended by the kink itself!

[ariadnes_string]

No worries! it's a very personal thing, and there are some things I have to read through my fingers, if at all. I really appreciate you reading this anyway. I'm very glad parts made you laugh--I didn't want it to be too deadly earnest. I'm glad I finally twigged to the aftercare being a big part of this kink--it's particularly nice to write--

Thanks again for reading!

[azziria]

God, you have no idea how hard you've just hit several of my kinks there... I don't think I've actually got polite words to express how I feel about this fic! Gorgeous :)

[ariadnes_string]

Those words are fine *g* I'm really glad it worked for you--I didn't know how this one was going to come across--thanks so much for reading and commenting!

[azziria]

Yes, well, revisiting (in my head) to your lines “The fuck, Danny? We’re going to have sex. Sex involving a knife. There’s gonna be blood. And with any luck it’s going to hurt really, fucking good. What more do you wanna know?” got me through a very boring meeting yesterday... ;)

[ariadnes_string]

lol--one of those meetings you need porn to get through, eh? I've had my share of those! glad to be of use, bb :)

[ariadnes_string]

yeah--got it out of my system, so to speak ;) On to kinder, gentler things, maybe...

thanks again for helping me with it!

[luthien]

Damn. I would love to read this but bloodplay is my one true squick. I'm sure it's a great story (for people who don't turn green. *wry grin*)

[ariadnes_string]

I totally understand--there are a few things that completely squick me too--it's very kind of you to drop by and let me know, tho'!

[raynedanser]

Sweet Jesus.

Knife/blood play doesn't pop up nearly enough and this TOTALLY made my day.

♥ you.

[ariadnes_string]

Cool--I'm glad it made your day! I'm kind of surprised by how much I like the kink--this is the second knife/bloodplay fic I've written--but there's something about it....

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!