Banked Fires (SPN fic; Dean/Cas)

Sep 09, 2010 21:29

The bad news is: this is not ANY of the 1001 things I was supposed to be doing ( Read more... )

nc-17, castiel, fic, sick!dean, s5, spn, fanfic

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ariadnes_string September 10 2010, 02:43:24 UTC
I doubt it! but thanks for reading--glad you liked that sentence!

(and jinx! we just both posted R fic at the same time! I read yours thru' for sheer pleasure, before I realized it was there for beta'ing! will have to go back tomorrow--great stuff, tho')

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art_savage September 10 2010, 13:22:37 UTC
Wow, this is really good. Hot, yes, but there's so much more to it than just the porn. I particularly enjoyed this bit:

Angels rarely used words with one another, and when they did, their sentences were full, complete. Not these staccato bursts of intimacy in the dark.

Damn good stuff!

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ariadnes_string September 12 2010, 15:01:49 UTC
I'm so happy you enjoyed it! Thanks for pulling out that sentence--I'm glad you thought there was more to the fic than just porn-- Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

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samjohnsson September 10 2010, 15:22:41 UTC
And he landed the rough head rub and hair muss that the angel had long ago learned to understand as a kiss.

Best line and great description of their relationship!

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ariadnes_string September 12 2010, 15:03:23 UTC
Thanks--I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and commenting!

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twasadark September 10 2010, 16:17:59 UTC
Ooooh - lovely and intimate and beautifully written. Love the humorous twist at the end.

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ariadnes_string September 12 2010, 15:04:46 UTC
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! And yeah--I can't imagine Dean would put up with the whole hushed reverence thing for long, even with Cas :)

Thanks for reading and commenting!

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angelshandprint September 10 2010, 16:18:17 UTC
Dude, this is NOT PWP, okay? Cross out the first P and W. *melts, almost*

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angelshandprint September 10 2010, 16:32:30 UTC
Btw, I'm glad they had the porn going. At least between the two sneezing suffering souls, Dean had something good out of it, and I get to watch that.

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ariadnes_string September 12 2010, 15:07:07 UTC
*g* I feel exactly the same way--made them feel good for a while, y'know!

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ariadnes_string September 12 2010, 15:05:54 UTC
Aw, thank you! I'm glad you felt like there was more there! Thanks for reading and commenting!

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