reversetrekbang entry: "The Loop"

[ariadnechan]

Title: The Loop.

Artist: theoreticalpixy

Author: ariadnechan and the_physicist

Rating Art/Fic: PG/ Fic: PG-13

Genre: Adventure

Pairing: Kirk/Spock & Pike/Number One.

Word Count: ~9570

Warnings: Time loops, Mayor characters disappearance.

Art Thumbnail:

Comments

[theoreticalpixy]

:D It's exciting to see the final. It's great how it unfolds and where you took the story, thank you so much for all the work you put into it!

[ariadnechan]

I'm so happy that you like it!!

[alinealghost]

Ari querida;
No habías posteado ya éste antes? Me suena conocido, por el detalle del rescate 'previo' que hace Número Uno. Fué muy divertido.
Namasté
AG

[ariadnechan]

si pero no estaba terminado era el ultimo borrador mio ahora esta terminado y si no comentaste antes pues comenta ahora que te parecio?? aun espero que me digas XD

[alinealghost]

Un kilo de relatividad especial, en la teoría del loop, bien llevado, porque es facilísimo confundirse, y me gustó enormemente la participación de Número Uno en el rescate de la cultura vulcana, así sea 'trampa' de Jim. Eso sí, acortaste los quince años a diez segundos -tanto los de Pike/NoUno como los de Jim/Spock- pero de otro modo, sería una novela kilométrica. Hay una diferencia enorme cuando escribes en español y cuando lo haces en inglés; en el segundo, es mucho más resumido, más compacto. Me gustó mucho, en verdad. Un abrazop.

[ariadnechan]

YAY!!

que bueno al fin un review!

el otro de arriba es de la dibujante

sip he pensado en escribir sobre los 15 años de Jim y Spock y los pon farr pero aun no tengo muchas ideas

tengo que pensar todavia en el fic de clamp/star trek que aun no termino, deberia ser facil pues conozco ambos universos y es practicamente paso por paso, pero en compacto, la primera temporada de las guerreras magicas, pero como que no me resulta ;___;

[jaylee_g]

This was a great story! The plot was fascinating, what an interesting concept. And I loved the humor sprinkled throughout. Jim muting his intercom made me laugh out loud. Excellent job!

[ariadnechan]

the story was mine, but the humor was from my author partner!

i'm really happy that you like it

we are thinking on writing the 15 years when i finish the fic i'm still block with and she other assignments she has :)

[coeurdesoleil]

This was a really interesting premise. Time loops always make my head spin but you did a good job of explaining what was going on. I loved that Kirk chose to stay with Spock for those fifteen years and I really liked that he asked Number One to make sure parts of Vulcna culture and traditions were being safeguarded.

This was lovely!

[ariadnechan]

YAY i'm so happy that you like it specially that you like almost all my parts in the job ;)!!

and i couldn't let Vulcan perish like that no? Jim have too vivid the memory of Spock prime loss not to try anything to save at least a little part of vulcan for both spocks

[therumjournals]

bones was hilarious in not believing them. cool time loop idea, i liked the way it played out.

[ariadnechan]

thanks you i'm really happy that it work for you :)