There’s no Sunshine without You a ship wars fic

Jan 24, 2010 18:20

Title: There’s No Sunshine Without You
Rating: R
Summary: Rain in San Francisco was not news, but when Spock is away it’s like the sky knows Jim misses him.
Warnings: NONE [TOS established bonded couple, long after TMP]
Word Count: 993
Beta: Thanks to my commander anoncomment7 and my friend verizonhorizon
Disclaimer: Why they aren't mine? Why?, well they are from ( Read more... )

shipwars, fic, k/s

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ariadnechan January 24 2010, 22:29:58 UTC
YAY!!!

i love the gif of cheerleading my friend!!!

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coeurdesoleil January 24 2010, 22:46:58 UTC
Oh, this was beautiful! I actually had tears in my eyes while I was reading; I could feel how much Kirk missed Spock almost physically

This part was lovely:
No other living being in the universe had those beautiful, long fingers like Spock, whose caresses are like velvet, who tastes like flowers, and who sends bolts of lightning shoot through Jim every time they kiss with their fingertips.

and this:
There is no memory without Spock in it.
Such a simple and sweet way of showing how much they mean to each other!
And then the ending left me with a happy grin on my face!
Loved this! ♥ ♥

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ariadnechan January 24 2010, 23:04:45 UTC
i' so happy that you like it!!

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scraplove January 24 2010, 23:24:25 UTC
Very sweet! I liked the happy ending.

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ariadnechan January 24 2010, 23:36:05 UTC
i'm glad you like it!!!
i hope more people read it!!

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daphnie_1 January 25 2010, 00:06:44 UTC
I'm working my way through everyones submissions.

This is really sweet! I'm so glad you decided to go for a happy ending! It's also rather true: It is hard to imagine the enterprise without Spock! Poor Kirk.

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ariadnechan January 25 2010, 00:26:08 UTC
feel Jim so heart broken make me want to have a happy ending!! really Jim can't live without Spock

i read all the entries!!!

i'm glad that you like it!!!

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nix_this January 25 2010, 03:45:42 UTC
Oh I like this. All of Jim's memories revolving around Spock, it's lovely :)

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ariadnechan January 25 2010, 04:18:03 UTC
thanks!!
Jim need his Spock to breath!!

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