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ariaadagio

Lightning Strikes Twice - Part 48

Oct 11, 2007 23:31

Title: Lightning Strikes Twice
Fandom: Grey's Anatomy
Pairing: Duh. (Mer/Der)
Rating: M
Timeline: Post Time After Time.

Well, I'm gonna ninja this part in here. OMG, you're thinking. A one part part? It's actually only about 800 words short of the upper limit, so it's not all that much shorter :) It's the first half of the bigger 'part' that I'm ( Read more... )

grey's anatomy, fic, lightning

Comments 43

thepointeinlife October 12 2007, 04:10:07 UTC

AH! Best chapter yet! I'm dying to see what she does, if she goes through with it, how this effects them. Yikes! This story could REALLY go on forever - how about you write the Merder spin off?

ariaadagio October 19 2007, 16:33:21 UTC

Thank you :) The next part will be a rollercoaster, but it will bring things to a resolution. I'm definitely not intending to go on with this forever, though it will set a lot of things up that I need to be set up for my sequel idea to work.

mmleadinglady October 12 2007, 04:35:04 UTC

Oh, I've been dying for this issue to come up forever! I want to be more articulate, but it's late, so I can't really concentrate. But I thought you handled it really well.

ariaadagio October 19 2007, 16:34:04 UTC

Thank you :) I'm glad you thought I handled it well. I spent a long, long time going over the last few pages of this chapter.

greenmood October 12 2007, 04:38:55 UTC

ooooh wow. loved it. perhaps the greatest chapter of all?

ariaadagio October 19 2007, 16:35:03 UTC

Thank you! I loved writing it. I'm so happy I've gotten MerDer to a place where they can actually have discussions like they did at the end.

Wow anonymous October 12 2007, 04:44:03 UTC

I love reading your story it is the best story I have read, I can't wait to read the next part.

Re: Wow ariaadagio October 19 2007, 16:35:39 UTC

Thank you! I hope to have the next part done in the next few days. It's proving to be a difficult little monster to finish off because there's so many worms in this particular can. I hope you enjoy it!

dermerfan October 12 2007, 05:33:21 UTC

Oh. My. GOSH.

I love you. I seriously love you for writing this chapter....

It was....Intense, then fluffy, back to intense...LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE Derek and his calm and soothingness (that's not a word, I know, but it's all I can form after this...) I LOVED how gentle he was about everything he was all Derek-y and....just wonderful!

It is SO refreshing that YOUR Meredith and Derek actually talk! And Derek doesn't let her avoid! Another reason I love you! :D

I totally didn't see the pill thing coming....But wow! I loved how you handled both characters, and it will really interesting to see what happens now...I totally see an AWESOME set up for a sequel! No pressure though. ;)

I can't wait to see the shopping trip....Them doing normal "couple" things. Yay!!!!

I ADORED this chapter....Everything about it was FABULOUS. This might be my new favorite chapter....I'm going to go read it again. THANK YOU for this! :)

ariaadagio October 19 2007, 16:37:59 UTC

Thank you so much :) This chapter was definitely a yo-yo. The next chapter will be even more so. I actually really wanted to write fluff, and then blam. Meredith comes up with the idea that she hasn't taken her pills. WTF? I'm glad, in a way, because this has become a supremely good challenge for me as a writer in my effort to treat this in a way that readers will want to read, that's true to character, and ends up in the place I want it to end up in. Anyway, I'm glad you liked it. Grocery shopping and cooking coming up, but, unfortunately, not quite as fluffy as I originally predicted. I still think it's a good read, though. At least, I hope so.