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ariaadagio

Lightning Strikes Twice - Part 31B

Jul 05, 2007 21:41

Title: Lightning Strikes Twice
Fandom: Grey's Anatomy
Pairing: Duh. (Mer/Der)
Rating: M
Timeline: Post Time After Time.

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When she left, she tore around the corner and managed to find herself in the midst of the surgical wing before she stopped and thumped back against the wall by the steps. The breath knocked in her chest. The OR board stared ( Read more... )

grey's anatomy, fic, lightning

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ariaadagio July 8 2007, 18:00:44 UTC

Thanks so much :) I enjoyed writing Mark in this. I hadn't really thought about whether Addison would have told Mark or not, but I'm mostly assuming she doesn't know. This was her first 'family reunion' as someone officially no longer attached to Derek, and I have a feeling she would have wanted to stay far, far away from that. In my timeline, Addison is about to go off to LA, anyway, so she won't be around much. I'm sort of going to be mixing up canonical crap to suit me. But, hey, I'm the writer. It's my prerogative ( ... )

greenmood July 6 2007, 02:45:08 UTC

Awww.. cute. I hope Susan stays alive in this story. That was overkill on the show. Literally.

ariaadagio July 8 2007, 18:02:57 UTC

Thanks :) Susan will not be dying. I thought that was stupid on the show. Just stupid. So much wasted potential, and so unnecessary. I was trying to show they'd managed to work around her complication in this part with the second surgery.

carsonfiles July 6 2007, 02:51:51 UTC

Poor Mark. I've gotten to really love Mark over the past few weeks. Mark and I? We're tight. And Susan? If you do kill her off. . .remember where you heard it first. C. Diff. (You knew I was going to work that in there, no?) And of course I love you and you're brilliant and all that, but since I've already metaphorically thrown you my panties. . .well, I just gave up trying to top that comment.

ariaadagio July 8 2007, 18:06:24 UTC

Thanks :) Susan won't be dying. Mark is a really fascinating character for me to write. I really don't like him all that much on the show itself, but writing SOSG made me fall a little in love with fanfic Mark! And... panties... Do you have any idea how much I laughed when I read that?

greysgurl July 6 2007, 03:19:31 UTC

Poor Mark. I really feel sorry for him. I hope here (and in the show) Derek and Mark forgive each other. I loved Meredith's crazy emotion thing she had going on, and I'm really glad you decided to make Susan survive. At least for now. Patiently (sort of) waiting for more.

ariaadagio July 8 2007, 18:07:24 UTC

Thanks :) My goal is to work a little on Mark and Derek here. We'll see what I manage to do. I won't settle for something cheesy and too easy, though. It will have to make sense. Susan is staying not dead. Honest!

dermerfan July 6 2007, 04:04:01 UTC

Awwww.......I LOVE that Mer told Susan!!!! Heck, I'm lovin' the fact that Susan is ALIVE....LOL!!!

Seriously, can't wait for more!!!! :)

ariaadagio July 8 2007, 18:08:25 UTC

Thanks :) Yeah, I enjoyed fixing Susan. I sort of decided somewhere along the way that I just won't be able to stomach writing a post S3 fic since I've already dealt with the ferry issues twice now. Another time would just... suck the life out of me. So this is sort of my way to horn in on things and fix it up!