Lightning Strikes Twice - Part 30

[ariaadagio]

Title: Lightning Strikes Twice
Fandom: Grey's Anatomy
Pairing: Duh. (Mer/Der)
Rating: M
Timeline: Post Time After Time.

Super Special Beta:  Geez.  I want a Meredith next time I have to go on a plane, and I'm not even at the sex yet.

This part wrote itself pretty quickly, but... it was unexpected.  I hope you like it.  I'm still slightly ambivalent

Comments

[mmleadinglady]

Hmm - I wish I had a Meredith on long plane trips too - even before the sex ;) And a couple of really big issues cropped up at the end there - can't wait to see how they play out when the plane lands! Great job as usual!

[ariaadagio]

Thanks :) Yeah, I want a Meredith too. I hate planes.

[carsonfiles]

I can't comment with you writing them like that. I'll be interested in how the age thing is playing out.

[ariaadagio]

Hopefully this is a good no comment :) I'm not sure where I'm going with the age differenced is what people are expecting. We'll see.

[carsonfiles]

I was trying to echo the "can't breathe with you looking at me like that" but didn't. At least not well. So yes, it's a good no comment. And the age. . .I haven't seen that as a big issue, so I don't have expectations on that.

[ariaadagio]

Thanks :) It's not really a big issue, at least not as big as Derek is assuming. I'll get to it soon.

[greysgurl]

Wow, I don't know where to begin. I loved Meredoth's ramblings a lot, and plane sex was hot. I'd almost forgotten about Derek's fear of planes, but you dealt with that really well, great job,

[ariaadagio]

Thanks so much :) Rambly Meredith is fun for me to write. You've probably gathered that I'm a rambly person from my blogs. It's very easy for me to slip into ramble mode when I write :) Back when I wrote for Lois and Clark, that was one of the reasons I loved to write Lois so much. And, yeah, Derek's fear of planes. Lol. I had so many people begging for plane sex, and I'm sitting there going, "How the hell am I going to manage *that* when he's already got a fear of flying, and now he's picked up a borderline anxiety disorder to boot?" I think it ended up working out well :)

[madison3788]

Oh God, that was perfect! I'm so proud of Meredith for being a good yin. I'm proud of her for wanting to be a good yin.
And thank you!! I've been wanting them to join the Mile High Club, and they finally did! :) Soo sexy. Once Derek got there, of course. ;) But so sexy...oh yes. And of course, the end. Where Derek was finally relaxed and completely terrified the Window Boy...and where they laughed. Ooh, so perfect.

Oh, but I would really like to know what issue Meredith is having. She was veeery sneaky there.

[ariaadagio]

Thanks so much :) Yeah, Derek had trouble getting started, but, well, that's to be expected if he's really that terrified, which he was. Poor guy. Anyway! Glad you liked this part :)

[newfrenchtoast]

zomg. this was perfect. and it was sex, but it wasn't formulaic, and there were difficulties, and mer bruised derek's ego, but they did it. on a plane.

fantastic in general. this is added to one of my favorite chapters from you.

[ariaadagio]

Thanks so much :) Yeah, I try to avoid the standard formula sex when I can. Sex is hard. I mean difficult enough for me to write. I at least try to make it challenging. And, lord, that sounded so many levels of wrong, I think I will shush now :)