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Captain Crash & The Beauty Queen From Mars - Part 2

Oct 27, 2010 22:00

Title: Captain Crash & The Beauty Queen From Mars
Fandom: Grey's Anatomy
Pairing: Mer/Der
Rating: T
Summary: Post S4 finale. What happened after Derek left to breakup with Rose?

Way, way, way, WAY behind on my feedback replies. Thank you so much to everyone who has taken the time to post, and thanks for being patient with me while my life blew ( Read more... )

grey's anatomy, fic, crash

Comments 21

HBR sez anonymous October 28 2010, 05:47:25 UTC

OMG ! That was wonderful, just wonderful. Is it wrong of me to want to have a hooker called Ashley as my new BFF?

I went into Season 5 fairly happy with how it started, but now I am starting to feel kinda bummed out that we didn't see the kind of conversations on the show, that you write so well, such as Mer talking about getting therapy, Derek feeling alone etc etc

Great job !

Re: HBR sez ariaadagio November 8 2010, 21:07:01 UTC

Thank you for the feedback :) It's not wrong. We can share Ashley at the next Dempsey Challenge, or something. She can have my portion of the hot buttered rum!

anonymous October 28 2010, 06:29:44 UTC

so wonderful. i just loved it! you write them as well as, if not better than, the grey's writers.

ariaadagio November 8 2010, 21:06:18 UTC

Thank you for the feedback :)

Daisy250 anonymous October 28 2010, 10:09:46 UTC

That was awesome! You´ve really connected the dots.
Now it makes sense that the S4 finale was the beginning of them being together for real.
Thank you so much for filling in a lot of blanks.
I hope you feel better, feeling depressed sucks, I know that :(

Re: Daisy250 ariaadagio November 8 2010, 21:06:02 UTC

Thank you, thank you :) And I do feel better, thanks for the well wishes!

kateliciously October 28 2010, 10:12:52 UTC

So awesome!
I was like 'no don't make them breaking up and please don't let him die' all the time but the fic is just soooo great and so lovely and beautiful written :)

ariaadagio November 8 2010, 21:05:21 UTC

Thank you for the feedback :) I'm glad you liked it! Of course I wouldn't kill Derek. He was alive in S5! :)

From: spydrga anonymous October 28 2010, 18:15:18 UTC

Really, really enjoyed this.
Loved this line: “Sweetheart, I wouldn't charge him, either.”

Thanks for writing it and sharing. You're the best!

Re: From: spydrga ariaadagio November 8 2010, 21:04:46 UTC

Thank you so much :) That was one of my favorite lines, too. A bit of my own snark shining through, shall we say, haha!