Somebody has written Left Hand of Darkness fanfic that actually reads like LeGuin.
You have no idea how surprising this is. I've done thorough google-scouring before just to prove to myself that Left Hand fic doesn't exist...because I was convinced that somebody out there would totally ruin the spirit of the story by writing Genly/Estraven porn.
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Also, to steal a line learned from one of matt_rah's friends, don't kill (or in this case severely disable) a character unless their death/disablement adds more to the story than their life did. In this case, I don't think Lin's later condition adds much to the story--even if she'd gotten out of Motley's house without looking at the wings, she'd still be pretty beaten up physically, traumatized psychologically, maybe unwilling to do any more art. Isaac would still be dealing with his girlfriend being in a very different place than him, which is the sort of tension Mieville's going for, but she'd actually be able to snap back, force him away, and otherwise have interesting interactions that might keep that last section of the book from dragging as much as it does.
On second thought,maybe I'm more opposed to bad plotting than sexism (though I think there is still some degree of sexism going on.)
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And yes, I agree that it's a calculated risk, like Vegas is, and it's not like Isaac doesn't do something just as silly for his part of the book.
I think what her disablement at the end does is simply make obvious and unavoidable what her being merely traumatized might make the reader able to gloss over. In both cases, nothing will ever be the same again; in the case that actually occurs in the book, Isaac's illusions that maybe they will be are shattered at the last minute. As opposed to him having to gradually and painfully realize that over an additional 50 pages of book. It's a narrative shortcut, I guess.
And it hurts that she's a second-class citizen who the world can do this to without blinking. But that's the fault of the whole world that's been created, not the fault of the particular narrative arc, and I think the author is trying to make a point by it.
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