Chapter Twenty Six

May 13, 2009 16:35

I apologize for this being late. I forgot that Evil's computer doesn't work with my files!! My fault!

Anyway, this has been spell-checked, but it has not had Evil's wonderful editing, so I'm SURE there's bound to be a mistake or two. You know how I like to make the SAME boy be in three different places at one time. ;)

Enjoy!!

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asytia May 13 2009, 21:05:20 UTC
Yay! Random refreshing of f-list FINALLY gave me results.

Wonderful chapter. And so many little storylines worked into it, which makes me happy.

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bloody_adorable May 15 2009, 23:27:58 UTC
Ooh, well, score! ;)

Thank you so much!

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witchy78 May 13 2009, 21:09:10 UTC
OMG ! So many things happened in this chapter ! And Jensen, Oh Jensen, you've been a really bad boy ! Don't you ever do this again !! Damn I'm mad at him right now...

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bloody_adorable May 15 2009, 23:28:30 UTC
LOL Hopefully everyone will be better behaved soon enough. ;)

Thanks!

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rae_1985 May 13 2009, 22:23:07 UTC
I KNEW I didn't like Dr. Lang. I knew it! grrrrrrrr. Jensen was such a good boy about the entire thing though. And the sex scene was fantastic, the perfect mix of desperate and needy.

YAY! No more Coulter. That is very good news for all our boys.

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bloody_adorable May 15 2009, 23:29:20 UTC
Yeah, Lang isn't impressing many people, I don't think! ;) Thank you, darling, I'm so glad that you liked it all!!

Yay, no more Coulter!!

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karenrae May 13 2009, 22:41:39 UTC
I kind of want to smack Jensen now. :) I'm just glad he told Jared what happened, and he better keep that promise he made! For some reason I think that Dr. Lang isn't going to give up that easily.

Great chapter! You guys are awesome and I can't wait to read the next one.

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bloody_adorable May 15 2009, 23:29:50 UTC
I'm sure he will. They're both doing very good at keeping their promises lately!

Thanks!

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kimberleyqaf May 13 2009, 22:54:59 UTC
Wow. Wasn't surprised that Dr. Lang made a move but I'm really really glad Jensen told Jared about it. I believe he'll keep his promise, too. He knows how important it is tha Jared keep his promises, so I can't see Jensen breaking one of his own. I honestly think they handled that quite rationally, considering. I only hope it doesn't come back to bite them later on.

And I'm SO glad they found Coulter guilty!! Thanks for another amazing chapter. :)

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bloody_adorable May 15 2009, 23:30:35 UTC
Yeah, it was good that Jensen got it out in the open right away, I agree. I hope it doesn't come back to haunt them too!!

Thank you so much!

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