Gender Bender Chapter 6

[are_sensei]

Comments

[spikykun]

I... was actually hoping you wouldn't go there. I mean, I know that in the Bleach 'verse this issue has never been properly addressed--we know they can give birth, but I find it a bit far-fetched that a live person could impregnate a temporarily sex-changed soul. I know it is a humerus fic and all, which is why you can let a few things slide (like how carefree Renji's been about being a girl thus far), but when you mess with Renji's manhood it gets personal :P dead babiez
I would also like to point out that I would have appreciated a little more... substance during the sex scene. I mean, it was hot and great, but I think I would have enjoyed a little more depth. Mainly, Renji's course of actions. It is the first time he's been a girl, I think. So Ichigo basically deflowered him, didn't he? I think it'll take some getting used to for Renji to have sex as a girl. Maybe a little confusion, some surprise, reactions Ichigo hadn't anticipated. I believe that kind of depth would do wonders :D

[are_sensei]

I figured this chapter wasn't going to go over all that well, so don't worry I don't mind the criticism. And I do plan on explaining exactly how this happened. (Well, Urahara will explain)

Also, I kinda of wrote the sex more from Ichigo's point of view here, so for him it was just kind of a blur and he didn't understand everything that was going on XD I will most likely show Renji's views on the matter in the next chapter.

[saiyanzrepublik]

omg this!! XD hahahha not pissed at all in fact I'm liking the idea of Ichi and Ren making super kawaii babies!! :XD:

[are_sensei]

Yes, RenIchi babies would be the cutest, wouldn't they? X3

[are_sensei]

That's a relief, I really hesitated on this chapter. I was like "Maybe I shouldn't go there." But it seems to be working out okay ^.^

And I don't know why XD I can't leave this story alone.