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APH: Pick-Up Chicks

Nov 19, 2009 03:10

Title: Pick-Up Chicks
Characters/Pairings: Australia/Brazil/Argentina, cameo by England and Portugal
Rating: PG-13 (R-ish at the end)
Warning: Polyamorous relationship of fail, issues with jealousy
Summary: (Prompt: Girls) OT3-fic. Brazil and Australia being themselves at a nightclub. Hijinks ensue. The wife disapproves. :|a

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AAAAAAAAAHHHH berseker November 18 2009, 20:19:46 UTC

I'm grinning so much MY FACE HURTS. This was just too fun. I loved it. It was perfect in every way and I loved the epilogue and kljdhfkghkhsaj Martin is so cute when he's jealous and the cuddling afterwards was the sweetest thing EVER and I love you with the passion of a thousand burning suns. If we weren't married already I'd ask you now BECAUSE I LOVE YOU. As it is, I'll send you roses and chocolate and shiny things.

I loved it. Really, really loved it. <3<3<3<3

<3333333333 candelaria November 19 2009, 02:46:56 UTC

THAT MUCH? Ahahaha awesome. XD I'm so glad you liked it. Because the idea of girs factoring into this equation was just too much to let go. XD ;alsdk poor Iggy, poor Port, POOR SUPEIN. Aussie can be such a little brat to him sometimes, I swear. |D And jealous Martin is aaaaaah I love him, just like he loves all those cuddles EVEN IF HE PRETENDS NOT TO. <3 Oh bb, we could always renew our vows, IT'S A BIT EARLY BUT STILL. eeeeee thank you, I love shiny things! :D

GOOD. Because I still feel a little ;laksjd when writing your country. Like 'A-Am I doing it right?' 8D; |D

abuse of the word perfect berseker November 19 2009, 19:19:13 UTC

YES THAT MUCH, and then I re-read it and kept thinking about it and replaying it in my head. Because it's so sweet and THERE'S SO MUCH THAT I CAN READ ON THAT IT'S NOT EVEN FUNNY. Except it is. You're a genius. Australia is awesome and I'd totally give him my bra only not because mine isn't sexy orz and I like how fun and light everything is (I don't know how to explain it, but lately I've been getting REALLY annoyed at the brazilian-girls-are-whores stereotype thing that seems to be going on since forever, and here you completely avoided that. They're fun and open and they're clearly enjoying themselves and Aussie doesn't think less of them for it, look, you let me know if I'm not making any sense. I just loved it. And the line Not that you need more than one of me to have amazing sex is perfect. And Aussie is hot. This is always worth mentioning. HE’S SO TALL AND STRONG AND MANLY AND HOT come here you ( ... )

ps berseker November 19 2009, 19:20:03 UTC

it amuses me to no end that Spain's baby was the innocent part here for a given value of innocent, of course but he'll be still paying for it. Oh, the irony. ^^

l-loving abuse ffff <3 candelaria November 20 2009, 17:09:39 UTC

A-AWWW BB. Thank you. I DIDN'T REALIZE THERE WAS A LOT TO READ ON? I just let it all out as I wrote it and it ran away with me. XDDD ffff you flatter me. <3 Come on, who wouldn't want to give Aussie their bra? HE'S VERY PERSUASIVE LIKE THAT. Well I can't really imagine angst with these guys all together, though that WOULD be something of a challenge to ponder on~ (That stereotype is so universal fff. I mean god, Brazilian girls are gorgeous but I don't think that automatically makes them whores. And I wanted to write something like that, because Aussie's all for the ladies. XD He probably got a lot of hugs out of those girls and was immensely pleased about it lol. And you're making perfect sense don't worry! :D You only need one Brazilian to have good sex, or maybe just one of Lu ahahaha. XD ;asldk my country IS hot, in a very rugged sort of way and I love him for it. DOES THIS MEAN HE GETS HUGS? :DDD /HUUUGS ( ... )

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