The Yellow Wood - 4 / 10 (WIP)

[ardatli]

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[moonbrightnites]

Excellent. :)

[ardatli]

You can always tell the chapters where MBN's hit me with the sledgehammer of FIX THIS during the beta process - when I do, and I post them, I get little gold stars! [points up] XD

{{hugs betas}} MINE

[moonbrightnites]

I felt really bad sending you so much red ink! Even though some of it were comments about what I especially liked -- that was still much inkage!

I'm very pleased with the ending now. :)

[ardatli]

Nooo! I open the file and yeah, my first reaction is usually "uuugggggh" but then I'm all "We can fix it!" and "wow, she's really engaging with this" and "coooool."

/incoherent today

Basically, it's all good.

I did keep the original final bit saved to a clipping file, just in case I can use pieces of it elsewhere. [sigh] (because you were absolutely right, but I still like it.)

[roane]

AHAHAHA. That's how I feel about greywash's edits all the time.

[moonbrightnites]

I am totally into it! :D

Definitely keep that last bit, I liked it. Just not where it was, for reasons you obviously decided you agreed with so YAY.
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(I need some Shelter userpics!)