[Fic] A Day on Tatooine (1/3?)

Feb 15, 2010 20:59

Title : A Day on Tatooine [1/3?]
Characters : Arthur+Alfred, contains Berwald/Tino+Peter later
Rating : G!
Genre : Fluff/Drama/AU
Word count : ~2900
Summary : Star Wars Original Trilogy AU! In which there is a (future) derpy young hero, a (secretly) cranky ex-Jedi and a day in their life together on a dinky moisture farm. Pilot fic for longshot ( Read more... )

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twistedsheets10 February 16 2010, 03:17:43 UTC
Oh God.

I kinda love you right now. Like. SO MUCh.

Eeee, Little Al, so cute and so clever! ♥

The one that said Arthur was truly happy. Perhaps happy enough to give up the whole universe. Perhaps happy enough that he might have actually did.

Oh, Arthur.

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twistedsheets10 February 16 2010, 03:21:49 UTC
Also, using Jedi mind tricks on kids, Arthur? Tsk, tsk. XD

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archosauria February 16 2010, 03:24:02 UTC
Verse!Arthur misuses the Force SO MUCH it's a wonder the Empire hadn't found him yet. XD Also, he likes cheating. Not exactly a paragon of the light side, he is!

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twistedsheets10 February 16 2010, 03:26:30 UTC
XD Parents of the world despair they don't have Arthur's power. But with a kid like Al, he needs all the help he can get.

Haha. Hooligan!Jedi!Arthur is the best (until you get him drunk, or supremely angry). ♥

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archosauria February 16 2010, 03:22:35 UTC
He was originally seven. I changed him to nine because, dangit, that's what came out and seven year olds are not capable of that much profound thinking.

Sometimes I wonder if I tend to write too much Arthur being all-sacrificing.....>_> Although in this verse....well, Alfred thinks he did, but SW being SW he didn't really.....

Thank you for the comment. <3 I always feel bad for not managing to always return the favor, but!

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twistedsheets10 February 16 2010, 03:32:27 UTC
Haha. Well, nine seems like a good age. I dunno, I have seen clever seven-year olds. XD

I kinda think if there was a way to raise Al without giving things up, he would have taken taken that road rather than...obscurity. I'm sure Arthur is capable of enormous self-sacrifice, but he has his moments of wistful longing.

♥♥♥

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archosauria February 16 2010, 03:41:18 UTC
Well. They can think with that kind of logic train, but usually not with that much profound angst. XD Maybe Alfred's exceptionally clever, but I think this is also quite exceptional for a nine-year-old.

I actually think he proposed taking Al out on a SPACE PIRATE1111!!!!1 career, but was vehemently turned down for obvious reasons. He used to be somewhat wilder, too, before Al starts to wake up to his Force powers. (See also : Hightailing it out of Mos Eisley in a hijacked speeder!) It's too bad that I can't really write that he went to do 'this' day from his perspective, it's actually pretty cool. His arrangement's a little bit more complicated than Obi-Wan's, anyway.

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