[FIC:] The Return of Sirius Black (HP, Remus/Sherlock!Sirius), PG

May 10, 2006 21:59

Title: The Return of Sirius Black
Rating/Warnings: PG, humour, Molly bashing, Bring Back Black, Remus/Tonks breakup
Summary: In which Sherlock!Sirius returns from beyond the veil to solve another mystery and Remus Lupin drinks more tea.
Word Count: about 2,800
Crossposted: my journal, the_kennel, too_old_too_gay, and deathly_lollows here.
Notes: And a very Happy Birthday to one of ( Read more... )

myfanfiction, hpfic, humor

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remeciel May 11 2006, 06:41:39 UTC
*burst oout of laughing*
You're getting better and better every single day at writing! This is one of the best fics you've ever written, and maybe I'm going to tell you this again for the next one, but who cares? *g*

Here are my favourite sentences :

A Muggle named Sir Henry Baskerville, who'd been passing by on the way to claim his father's cursed estate, saw the canine silhouette and paled, terrified. This is not his story.

The last sentence of this praragraph is totally amazing? I can't tell why, but as soon as I read this, I said to myself :'I'm going to love this story!'.

"May I?" Remus gestured to the books and asked, salivating.

yeah, Remus. I'm going to salivate too if I'll ever see these books' titles, too. *gg*

"I've come back from beyond the grave to hunt down and punish those who would match fuchsia curtains with avocado tiling," Sirius answered, gesturing around the room. "But I see I am already too late."

LOLOL, dear God, Sirius is so fabulous here. So canon, and so Xellas's, too. *gg*
(and a little of Molly bashing isn't too bad. *gg*)

I think I may stop here. Or I will quote every single sentence from your fic. Your Sherlock!Sirius is, indeed, one of your greatest idea. Seriously, have you ever thought of becoming a professional writer? (aillil, this works for you, too. *gg*).

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remeciel May 11 2006, 06:43:48 UTC
Oh, forgot to ask: may I rec it on my LJ? please? pretty please?

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archon_mentha May 11 2006, 13:46:30 UTC
Of course - I would be honored, thank you! ♥

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remeciel May 11 2006, 17:37:12 UTC
Juts did it - thhnks a lot! *hugs*

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archon_mentha May 11 2006, 13:45:52 UTC
I'm going to tell you this again for the next one, but who cares? *g*

Well, I certainly wouldn't mind! *LOL* Thank you so, so much for being one zillion different kinds of wonderful. And for your lovely comments - I'm so very glad you enjoy him! *hugs*

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