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[Toward the Terra] Aid and Comfort

Jun 05, 2010 01:18

Title: Aid and Comfort
Fandom: Toward the Terra
Pairing: Light Keith/Shiroe.
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 975
Notes: Written for the kink meme.
Summary: In the years following his time at Station E-1077, Keith isn't entirely alone--in a way, Shiroe is there for him.

( In the six years since he had graduated from Station E-1077, Keith Anyan had served on two space stations and three spaceships. )

keith, kinkmeme, toward the terra

Comments 7

rinhail June 6 2010, 10:44:09 UTC

I always loved the relationship between these two, and am glad someone wrote something on them. Excellent job portraying a haunted Keith. :)

annwyd June 7 2010, 12:56:43 UTC

I'm glad it works!

etrangere June 7 2010, 16:26:23 UTC

aww

that's one of the most tragic relationship in Terra e, it's good to see it given due in such a well characterised fic.

annwyd June 8 2010, 22:42:39 UTC

I'm glad you liked it.

luna_ashes June 9 2010, 05:47:09 UTC

I absolutely love the dialogue in this fic. xD Particularly Shiroe's - you got his personality down perfectly! I can see him saying things like "Why don't you know how to feel about me being here, Keith? [...] It's because it isn't in your programming, is it!"

annwyd June 9 2010, 16:44:25 UTC

Thank you. :) I blame that on the official translation being exceptionally good at conveying voice despite the lack of a dub, I think.

rizuka November 8 2010, 18:05:26 UTC

*late to the party xDDD*

I really like both of them (Shiroe and Keith) and seeing their interaction amuses me so much... even till the end, Keith still think about Shiroe and it's just d'awww <333

Thank you for writing this :) your characterization is awesome!