(FIC) Fluent in silence (Bruce/Clark, R)
Written for Bruce's birthday, and posted a little bit early so I can celebrate it with starsandsea :D
I tried to do a '5 times...' but failed at the last one, so it's a '4 times...' fic. I think it works fine as it is anyway! Beta by the team beta damos and jij. All other mistakes by yours truly :)
Happy birthday to the Big Bad Bat! *twirls happily*
Title: Fluent ( Read more... )
I tried to do a '5 times...' but failed at the last one, so it's a '4 times...' fic. I think it works fine as it is anyway! Beta by the team beta damos and jij. All other mistakes by yours truly :)
Happy birthday to the Big Bad Bat! *twirls happily*
Title: Fluent ( Read more... )
I'm coming to these comments like 2 days late now, but I don't think I've heard about this yet...*looks at mailbox*
The laptop adapter bit! ...to be honest, that section makes me kind of sad for personal reasons that never occurred to me while I wrote it, and now they are coming to haunt me...
I saw you mention that to Brady! *hugs* I'm sorry it's a personally sad section, but it's beautiful and meaningful and gah I'm tearing up woeeee... :) Oh romantic AC adapter, I love it so.
(As a side note, Clark seems to have a tendency to interrupt himself in mid-sentence and a tendency to address himself in the second person in his journal! I'm not sure I'm happy with his journal-voice, he sounds a bit whiney...but I just need to add one little thing and then I'll share it with you!)
I expect him to have his freak outs pre-relationship, even if that's not very believable!
With Bruce, I think it's very believable. I think Bruce would put off committing for a very long time, planning and worrying, and plotting out all possible paths a relationship might go in, and even freaking out...but once he was in, he'd be in for the long run.
*random hugs*
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