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arch_schatten

FIC: Spring, It Never Was

Jan 12, 2007 15:59

I totally forgot to repost this Secret Santa story back in my journal. I had a bit of a fit over this story because nothign seemed to work... so I added the translation of the lyrics of 'Primavera Nunca Fue' in the beginning, with the hope that they could simbolize the endless possibilities and the windows of oportunity that will yet come that I ( Read more... )

superman, fic, slash, gift, mr. terrific, batman

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jij January 13 2007, 04:23:25 UTC

I want to write T/B/S pr0n now!!!!

*cheers*

And Mina, you know I loved this story! Michael is soooo awesome! And I didn't mind that Clark and Bruce aren't together in it, because it's very hot and Kal is so cool, and it does end very hopefully in some ways. I'm sure Bruce will eventually get his three-way!

And the song at the beginning is so beautiful...*sigh*

arch_schatten January 13 2007, 05:48:22 UTC

Yes! I inspire threesomes of doom!

Michael sole the thunder here, though you know how much I fretted over it. I am glad you enjoyed it, though, it was all that mattered :) Bruce will eventually will get what he needs, be it threesome or not, I'm sure. I love him too much not too!

I can send you the song, btw, if you want it, though it's... heh, well, it might be sort of not what you expect! :P

arch_schatten January 13 2007, 05:17:32 UTC

Ah! Threesome love! I'm so glad you enjoyed this, mostly I just can't help myself with Michael, he's freaking.. terrific!

T/B is one of my secret loves. Their love is so geeky!!

victoria_wayne January 13 2007, 00:35:21 UTC

“How very selfless of you.”

::gigglesquee::

Also, I don't think I've ever been quite so taken with a description of Clark while he's getting hot and heavy... I think it's the eyes. Very nice.

arch_schatten January 13 2007, 05:31:16 UTC

Oh, Michael was being so selfless by having sex with Clark. Surely he did it all for Bruce. He's awesome like that :)

Glad you liked the invisible sex, it was an interesting challenge. And kungfunurse's stories are great for the alien Kal angle on sex! I only partake on her fanon :)

yamheads January 15 2007, 09:57:23 UTC

When I read the summary for the first time, I was like o_o "what? but, BUT that is ... what?" But you totally made it work. I was just, astounded at how hot it turned out to be. I enjoyed it in an unhealthy kind of way, lol. :>

arch_schatten January 15 2007, 18:39:19 UTC

Lol, I know, the summary called for voyeur porn, but I just couldn't get Bruce on the mood, he was brooding and moping in my head. And I have a terrible weakness for Batman/Terrific, so... voila! I'm very glad you enjoyed it in all it's crazy madness :)

taro_twist January 20 2007, 04:16:48 UTC

Whoooaaa ... this story was so ... complicated, lol. And fantastic, as always! But complicated. I love how you didn't say who Batman's boyfriend was at the beginning. I was so convinced that it was Clark and that he was going to see Clark cheating on him and that it would be heartbreak hotel ... but what actually was going was quite an unexpected twist.

First off, I love the lyrics to that song. They're so bittersweet, and they really capture the mood of the story.

And as always, I love your Bruce. This line:

he hated acting like an idiot when capes who knew his Batman persona were present.

God, that humanizes him so much. And this:

Clark was passion, trust and love, and completely out of his reach.

Gah ... *wibbles* Bruce! How could you think so poorly of yourself!!!! Ahhh!!!! He's such a woobie here.

The hem of the top caught in his head, messing with the perfect spit curl and the black mane, giving Superman a wild air.

Mmm ... I can never get enough of the boys with messy hair ... and this:

Seeing Kal - ( ... )

arch_schatten January 21 2007, 20:34:11 UTC

LOL, complicated is exactly the word I would use too. I was pitching the story idea to a friend, and he kept telling me 'look, the invisible sex is hard enough, why are you trying to hook the other two? just have him watch!' and I just couldn't leave Bruce out of a relationship there! Specially out of a relationship with Terrific! *loves Terrific ( ... )