FIC: Impasse

[arch_schatten]

I was supposed to be doing homework... but I had this bunny biting my leg, and it wouldn't let me be. So here, happy belated birthday pervyficgirl! I know it's very late, but you know, for some reason, tangerines and porn made me think of you :)

Also, jen_in_japan unwittingly provided the "plot". I know there's no plot. But she prompted it non the less :) Not beta'ed.

Comments

[tmelange]

Alfred! Mwuahahaha! I love you!

This was great Mina. Brought a big smile to my face. And I love the thought of Bruce and Clark at an impasse, and all of Clark's rationalizations. Too funny. Plus, the whole description of the tangerine and the hand and the sucking...just hawt. :))

Kudos.

[arch_schatten]

I know Bruce can be very on-your-face when it comes to sensuality because he knows he's a handsome devil, but my favorite kind of seduction is the one done unwittingly :) I'm glad Clark's theories and rationalizations and general poutiness was fun :)

[arch_schatten]

*blushes* No way I could put you to shame! But I'm glad you liked it, Bruce was feelng peckish :)

[damos]

Wow.

Remind me to pick up some tangerines on the way home.

Wow.

Detail for the win! What a lover-ly use of small details to paint a much bigger picture.

Wow.

[arch_schatten]

I hope you do, tangerines are delicious! And fun!

Hehee! I'm happy the imagery clicked. I couldn't remember what the pieces of oranges are called. So I went with.. pieces. Go me! :)

[fenm]

Oh, dear lord.. I was eating an orange when I read this... ^_^
Yummy (the story. Well, and the orange)!

[arch_schatten]

Tehee! I was eating a mandarin while writing it :P Write what you know, don't they say? X) Glad you enjoyed it! (both the orange and the story!)

[supercaptain182]

Orange and leather seems like a mighty fine combination. Fantastic job. *g*

[arch_schatten]

Lol, well, I wouldn't complain about leather and oranges either if I were Clark. Glad you enjoyed it!