[01/01] Wallflower

[arasukishi]

Wallflower
Jun. Loss. Years.

Summary
Based on Arashi’s Ashita no Kioku
“Wanting to make the sunset I saw with you that day eternal, I stretch my hands out into my memories and try countless times to reach you. We can never regain the same scenery, or the same feelings, that is why we look back to the shining dreams of our past.”

A/N
I rushed through

Comments

[arasukishi]

Thanks so much for reading this!

I noticed it, too, the break in the flow of the story. Between writing that piece in second-person POV or writing from the perspective of a very young, very innocent girl, I settled for the lesser evil.

But yes, it broke the flow. ::P I don't even like my ending very much.

Thanks again for reading!

[jade_lil]

Please excuse me while I sob in one corner *sob sob sob*

for something so angsty, this was written very, very well. your choice of words, the imagery, the PLOT itself... to be honest, I didn't want to read it at first because I had a feeling someone was bound to die in the end, and I was right *bawls* (and god, I was just glad it wasn't Ohchan or Nino)

I love the fact that you didn't actually wrote EVERYTHING and yet, you still managed to pull it through.. I was already bawling by the time I was reading the 3rd part... you're so good, really...

I couldn't remember the last time I enjoyed reading an OC fic (coz I'm actually so into OhMiya and yaoi, please ignore me, heheh) and i want to thank you for sharing this. You're an amazing writer and I hope you could share more of your stories in the future.

Mabuhay and cheers to you, kabayan :))

[arasukishi]

Thanks so much for your kind words!

I originally just wanted to showcase the 'bond' between the members, but it came out like this. Hahaha. I hope it wasn't too sentimental or anything.

I'll be writing more! Thanks so much!

[jmonogatari]

I can't believe I've just read this now. I really like it and will repeat the truthful comments above over and over. It is written beautifully and I love it! Will read it over and over again.
And it is so sad. But yet beautiful.
Thank you for sharing this.

[arasukishi]

Thank you so much - the appreciation from the fandom is amazing, really! I personally like this story the most, out of all the shiz I've written so far.

Thank you for reading. ::D