[07/07] Shiretoko

[arasukishi]

Shiretoko
February 2012 - June 2013

Summary
Sakurai Sho and Matsumoto Jun are two brothers who visit the estate of their father’s death.

A/N
[11.33, 1 January 2013] This is it

Comments

[24iza_run]

Wow. The plot just brilliant. Every time I read the new chapter I was speechless cause nothing of it was under my expectation! You and your friends really done a good job! When I find out that Sho&Jun were actually dead and Masaki was the one who killed them and the father...I got goosebump. It's creepy, seriously ==" But anyway, I really enjoy this story. You wrote a really good horror fic!

Thank You SO much for sharing! ^^

[arasukishi]

Yey! Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked the plot. I was worried it might come off as too complicated, but yey! You liked it! I couldn't have done it without my friends - all those nights spent thinking of horror twists paid off! ;;( Maybe I'll write another horror fic in the future! It's fun!

<3 Thank you so much for reading!

[dekkawai]

To be honest I love your plot twist. The most I can guess from your story is Jun and Sho were dead... but not with the reality that Jun become a ghost.
It's still disappointing tough, that Aiba really capable of killing Jun and Sho...but I suppose that's needed right?
And I love how Ohchan appears in this fic...being as calm as himself even when he saw a ghost :) *remind me of one HnA ep in haunted house xD*

Finally, thank you for this m(_ _)m I really love this fic...otsukare xD
I'd love to read another horror story of yours :D

[arasukishi]

Thanks very much for reading! <3
Personally, I think there were too many plot twists, but I'm kinda happy it ended the way it did. About Aiba though, I really do think that I made him capable of killing the others because I'd like to show 'another side of him' somehow. I always only see the 'happy side' so...

I like Ohno here, too. But I have to admit my favorite character here is Nino. So amazingly deadpan.

Thanks once again for sticking to the very end of this story! <3 I would love to write more horror, too.

[harumi_desu]

Hello! I really loved the story! <3
Each chapter really exceeded my expectations and surprised me at all times! I never expected this ending!
It was shocking to see that Aiba was capable of that, and as Nino was so deadpan about it. It really was scary persecution ... and knowing that Sho and Jun had died. I was thrilled when Jun, despite being dead he want to keep the promise with his brother. *cry*

PS: My English is not very good, but I had to write to thank you for your great work! :D

[arasukishi]

Hi, Harumi :)
Thanks so much for reading this story! I'm glad you liked it! :D I hope to be able to write more psychological horror in the future. I really enjoyed writing this, and I'm glad you found it enjoyable to read, too!

Thanks so so much!

PS Your English is already wonderful! It's very precise. :)

[munchuuu]

waw...waw...waw...
it's all i can say.
well, i'm speechless.

well done!

[arasukishi]

I'm glad you enjoyed it! All the way to the end, too! Thanks so much for reading! :D