[Step and Go] ひとりの夜なら凍えてしまうだろう

[boblemon]

Title: ひとりの夜なら凍えてしまうだろう (If a night comes that I’m alone, I wonder if I’ll freeze.)
Rating: NC17
Pairing: Nino/Touma, Juntoshi (side pairing: Sakuraiba)
Genre: Romance, Angst
Disclaimer: I guess Johnny’s technically owns Arashi, huh? Still not me.
Summary: Nino is feeling heartbroken after Ohno, his best friend, and Jun, the man he loves, begin

Comments

[winteryskies]

:D (a, b,&c; A, B,& C O_O *chants*)
omg...have I told you already that I love your writing style?
omg, the image of nino trying to laugh, but holding back and nodding XD

and you used gimmick game lyrics!! \o/
really, usually i hate songfic, b/c seriously, it's messed up w/ the story and the fic there, it's like your reading two different things at the same time~, so i love the way you incorporated it into the dialogue. And I love the way that Ohmiya knows each other SO WELL, and yet, not completely; it makes it realistic ~
Anyways, not really a toma/nino fan (or a toma fan at all really.....not that I don't like him, i do :P), but i really loved and enjoyed this~
and omg! two more sections! \o/~♥

[boblemon]

Haha, thanks for your enthusiastic comment! I'm glad you liked this part!

I was a little tentative about posting this, since not so many people were enthusiastic about the Nino/Touma part, but I came up with such a good image in my head that I couldn't resist.

I don't think you can have Nino without Ohno or visa versa. They are just, like, attached at the hip. And I love to think that they have 'girl talk' and whatever about their boyfriends. ^.^

[maibachan]

MOAR SEX! was definitely the best way to end this ^___^ Rofl
OMG THIS WAS SO FREAKIN' AWESOME!!!
I CAN"T WAIT TO READ THE OTHER TWO SECTIONS!!!!

I missed your writing so much! Thank you for this!!
Toma the animalll *drools*

[maibachan]

This is most definitely going in my memories - so I can read it again, and aigain, and again
♥

[boblemon]

Haha, thanks for your comment! XD Sex is always a good way to end a fic, ne?

Aw, you're making me overconfident~

[citlecrewolf]

Toma's a sex god! I knew it! *lol* Nino deserves the best and if he can't have Jun or Ohno, Toma will more than do! Enjoyed it. Would love to see the scene between Jun and Ohno after the 'Toma' incident that fired Nino up. Is that going to be part of one of the other stories? And wasn't Aiba a cutie being all protective! Looking forward to more! :]

[boblemon]

Haha, I wasn't going to write the end of that scene since it would most likely be this:

Ohno: We were just talking, jeez.
Jun: *pouts*
Ohno: *ignores*

Aiba is looking out for everyone and doesn't really think about offending people or stepping on toes, I think. He's protective of EVERYONE.

Thanks for the comment! I hope you enjoy the upcoming parts, too! ^.^

[ichi_toshimiya]

OMG OMG OMG OMG

It was a BLAST...!!!!

I LOVE IT..!!!

You really are great..
And I like the thought that Nino are jealous...
Nino was so CUTE at it... XDDD

Thanks...
And I like gimmick game so much, thank for using it... ^^

[boblemon]

Haha, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I like Nino being jealous too, because I think it fits his personality.

I'm glad you liked the lyrics, too, they were just too perfect!

[namichan]

i was a toma fan before, just toma, not so much with tomarashi, but damn, you've made me rethink that. i loved the writing style you used, and nino's little fetish was perfect:-p can't wait for the other 2 partsXD

[boblemon]

Wow, thanks! I'm glad Touma/Nino is okay. ^.^ He's just too cute, I can't leave him alone!

*blushes* I'm glad the fetish turned out well, I wasn't sure if it was too much... Thanks for reading!