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ajin April 28 2009, 19:20:03 UTC
YES! I definitely feel better now <3 Gonna comment later cause my parents are nagging me to talk to them on skype...can't really say no as they are paying for my uni, can I^^

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ajin April 28 2009, 19:42:01 UTC
Having kanjani8's Glorious as random background music while reading your story makes it even better:D Somehow the lyrics just fit so perfectly. Well, it just made my day anyway^^
<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
Yay for more Sho and Ohno interaction. I can't make myself to feel sorry for Sho no matter how hard I try...I mean, it's Ohmiya we're talking about. And yay for Jun smacking Aiba on the head with his numerous rings. It's so easy to imagine that happening:P Eh, can't wait for more of course. If you need motivation pm me and I will nag you ^o^

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shotaphile April 28 2009, 19:52:53 UTC
Glad you like it~ <3

And Sho's dealing with it, in his own special way.

hm, thankfully I at least know the next part, because there's one line in particular I came up with when I was writing this one but didn't QUITE fit in this installment. So, er, it's only the one AFTER that where I have to figure out what they're doing next.

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ajin April 28 2009, 20:05:13 UTC
That's good to hear. Obviously, you don't need to update daily. I'd rather wait than have a rushed chapter^^ so take your time <3

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ltgmars April 28 2009, 19:53:43 UTC
Aw, Sho. He cares so much. At least Ohno's good for Nino. ♥

Also, the comment about the stove and socks made me laugh out loud. XD

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shotaphile April 28 2009, 19:59:00 UTC
I'm glad you like it!

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porvoras April 28 2009, 20:16:00 UTC
|DDDD ♥

Ohno's so clueless it's cute. Sho refusing to cry made my stickyhot day cooler |D I would do the same thing in his situation XDD

Your Aiba&Jun make me ship Aiba/Jun. I DON'T EVEN KNOW IF THEY EVEN HAVE A NAME SQUEESH ASDFGHJ

So they gave up the purple hair discussion. That sucks. I could picture it noww /pervs

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shotaphile April 28 2009, 20:34:14 UTC
When I burn myself at work I just sort of shake my hand, curse, and get back to work. D: I'm sort of used to it by now.

AIBA AND JUN ARE BFFL'S!!! <3 <3

I honestly think Sho would not be so willing to give up Nino to someone with purple hair. Admittedly, it would be a rather embarassing thing to concede to. Even if it IS Ohno.

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porvoras April 28 2009, 21:01:01 UTC
IKR. It's not fair. Why can't we regular people have jpop idols sucking on our fingers :[ I just burn myslef with a hair straightener cause I'm lame.

THEY TOTALLY AREEEE. They should have those matching bff bracelets/rings/necklaces and stuff. Matching underwearclothes would be a plus. But they b angels. Of course they're matching /fails

Sho's a wet blanket. end of story. I would totally throw my best friend at a person with purple hair. Especially if it's Ohno. It would notttt; well maybe. But it's better than a multicolored rainbow haired person. Ohno would work it. epic fail response got long.

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shotaphile April 28 2009, 21:19:49 UTC
Aiba's probably tried the matching thing before. And then Jun proceeded to kick his butt :P

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daisuki_dkzen April 28 2009, 20:33:59 UTC
“Now I really am going to cry.” Sho whimpers." <~~awww, Sho~!
*cuddles him* poor baby.

but its really hard to stay mad at oh-chan, ne? cuz he's just so darn earnest about everything, and completely genuine. sho cant hate him because oh-chan is completely there for nino, and just nino.

heh, i love jun and aiba in this, as always. i wonder. did jun cause the pot to boil over? haha, socks are sentient! genius!

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shotaphile April 28 2009, 20:40:23 UTC
Sho needs the love, I don't know why it's so easy to pick on him.

But you're right, if Sho is going to be okay with ANYONE stealing Nino from him, it's got to be Ohno. Ohno's not thinking about sex, or money or power, he's just thinking about Nino. ...and maybe ice cream.

And Jun totally did, the awful boy, he's supposed to PROTECT his charge, not injure him!

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daisuki_dkzen April 29 2009, 18:47:46 UTC
It IS really easy to pick on Sho, isn't it? ^__^() I'm guilty of that too.

Ohno is definitely ALL about Nino. But the ice cream is completely Nino's fault really.

I totally forgot that Jun was supposed to be Sho's guardian in this! Oops!!

Ahh...I can't wait for the next chapter!

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shotaphile April 29 2009, 21:19:46 UTC
Ahaha, who would be poor Sho's guardian then? And why would Jun be there? Ohno doesn't GET a guardian. Just a stalker later on >.>

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font April 28 2009, 21:07:59 UTC
ajkfasjkfashf aaaaaaahhhh i am so in love with this story!!! and, oh, sho -- that's the thing about him, that despite his best intentions, his love for nino is still interested, as opposed to ohno's completely disinterested love -- ohno just loves nino for nino, while sho can't help but have these little things about nino that he wishes would change. and sho's too smart and honest with himself not to see that this is true. :'(

and Ohno understands at least enough about the world to know that it’s not his fingers that are making him feel that way, though not quite enough to figure out the real cause.

i love everything about this story, and everything about the way you tell it.

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shotaphile April 28 2009, 21:28:38 UTC
Sho is a very smart boy. He can tell Ohno is sincere and while, yeah, sure, Sho's sincere too, it's not the same. And he's learning to deal.

I am so glad you're enjoying it, to be honest I was a little nervous after the complete style change my Quiz Show fic took that I would have trouble finding this voice again.

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font April 28 2009, 22:15:19 UTC
i made the mistake of looking up at your icon while typing this comment and lost several minutes of my life.

i was a little nervous about it too, honestly, though i guess it didn't occur to me that you wouldn't be able to, just that you would be, hmm. swallowed up by your new world. (i'm watching that one quietly right now XD i am a lurker at heart, especially when i haven't formulated my thoughts yet -- both the show and your story are still swirling around for me right now, i have to wait for them to settle.) and you made a comment about this story hanging over your head, and i thought, D:! which is not to pressure you or anything, lol what a stupid thing to say, but i mean, of course you'll move as the spirit lists. i just selfishly hope that it keeps listing this way from time to time.

oh, sho. he's such a good guy, and i believe that he'll find someone to love who doesn't sometimes make him feel sad and helpless.

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shotaphile April 29 2009, 01:26:55 UTC
It's a thing of beauty, isn't it? I love rawambition so much right now. *stares tranfixed at icon* ...

I think I honestly just needed a few days away from this fic to readjust. I've been pounding away at it for 11,000 words now and, looking back, it's only actually covered two physical days. To be honest, it's a tiny bit disheartening. I like this story, I really do. But I also like being DONE with stories (if that makes any sense) and while I'm not going to abandon it, I don't think I'll be updating it quite as regularly as I did before my week hiatus in Seattle.

That's not to say there will be months or even weeks between posts, I'll probably still manage two or three a week, but I sort of want a bit of freedom to explore other ideas too.

Thank you for your support, as always! <3

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