My American Daughter

Aug 23, 2011 23:46


Title My American Daughter
By: arashiforyou ( Read more... )

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ichi_toshimiya August 30 2011, 03:47:07 UTC
Kyaaaaa Ohchan was cho kawaii as a father.. fufufu
Adorable...

And those girls...
Hate them for bullying my daughter... *ups* xixixi

Ow Sho and Mao is a teacher...
Cool...

thanks for the update...
Oh may I asked you something dear, how old are you make Ohchn here?
just curious, coz his step daughter was 17 right?
Just kind a curious how much year gaps between them.... :))

Thanks for the update...

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arashiforyou August 30 2011, 04:35:52 UTC
i'm glad you're enjoying so far! :3
good question!
ohno is 30 in this story. so it's as if it's happening now in this year. (oh, i should make him 31 then!) XDD

that's why the age gap feels weird because ohno is young to have a 17 year old daughter. it'll be as if he had a daughter when he was 13 O__O
XDD
thanks for reading!

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ichi_toshimiya August 30 2011, 11:40:19 UTC
31...
So how old is he when he married his wife?
I thought he might be around 35 year... but yes it's so weird if at 30 he already had a 17 years old daughter... XD

i'm so gonna wait for the next one... fufufu

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arashiforyou August 31 2011, 02:00:37 UTC
gee, you really want to know the bits and pieces, ne!

well, i made his wife go through two miscarriages (briefly mentioned in the prologue). so that's almost two years already. so i guess you can say he got married at 28 or 27 ish. :/
yeah, the age does make it weird since he's 30. that's why he thought he was adopting a 7 year old, but it turns out...oh she's 17...okay! XDD

that's part of the drama.

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ohmiyaskdesu August 30 2011, 04:58:40 UTC
OMYGOSH! I LOVED IT!!!
those three girls, ugh!
but I expected kiritani mirei and koijima haruna to be one of the mean girls haha.
And Ohno, Lol:

"What if she has a boyfriend already! I can't be a grandfather so soon!"

So cute, worrying over her.
And awws, he cares so much about her!!
And they even walked home holding hands.
AWWWWSS so cute.!
I love this. Thanks for the update :D

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arashiforyou August 31 2011, 02:05:53 UTC
i'm glad you're liking it!
and those mean girls were hard to pick. i tried to stay away from toda erika. i felt like i bashed her too much in my hogwarts fic XDD

i'm glad you enjoyed the little comedy part in there. :3
i've actually been going through so many revisions for this chapter just to get it right and not seem rushed.
thanks for reading!

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spsn August 30 2011, 06:26:00 UTC
it's not Japanese highschool without the bullies huehehe... nice bullying chapter, makes me wanna strangle those 3 spoiled brats :d, i'd wonder how Oh-papa will react when he knows about the bullying, keep the chapters coming :d :d

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arashiforyou August 31 2011, 02:07:44 UTC
oh, there's going to be more bullying, so brace yourself! ><
actually, the next chapter would seem pretty obvious what's the next problem to tackle.
i'll try to update as fast as i can. now that the battle of the pv is finish, i can focus more on this story.
thanks for reading!

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spsn August 31 2011, 14:54:53 UTC
ah, i hope bullying is not solved w/ just 1 chapter? hahaha, though i wanna strangle the brats but it's fun to read (am contradicting myself here), and oh i forget to tell you, i love aiba the stalker hahahaha... please have him appear more *grin*

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arashiforyou August 31 2011, 16:59:22 UTC
haha! i probably won't let the bullying end so easily like the other problems in previous chapters.
HA! i like stalking aiba too! :3
i'll try to make arashi have more appearances ><
thanks for reading!

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borylovearashi August 30 2011, 07:00:31 UTC
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that was so sweet finally she start ti act nice Oh-chan
that stupide kiritani mirei god you know i hate her like hell
i hope umika-chan kick her face
thank you so much for this part i love it your the best can't wait for more

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arashiforyou August 31 2011, 02:09:55 UTC
yup! first, she talks to ohno. then she learns to behave properly, and now she accepts him (sorta) as a father! yeah! XD

hahah! i knew i wanted to make kiritani the leader of the bullies, although i was tempt to make kojima the main bully (because i watch her in ikemen desu ne)

thanks for reading!

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midshadow August 30 2011, 08:38:32 UTC
Sato lives in the love hotel? Haha! And aiba and ohno stalking umika is so cute! This chapter is adorable! Thanks! :D
And yeah my lj text bunches up too! >:(

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arashiforyou August 31 2011, 02:12:24 UTC
haha! yeah, he does. just to make things interesting :3
teehee! it was funny because i remember that scene in uta no oniisan when ohno was under disguise XDD

i know! all the troubles started when they put up the new rich text buttons. i hope lj fixes it soon.

thanks for reading!

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