Comments | arashiaddict246: Oneshot

arashiaddict246

Oneshot_04

Jan 04, 2009 19:36

A touch of lips, our fingers link

pairing: makotoXruka
summary: ruka didn't let makoto fall off the school roof
raiting: not suitable for homophobes, otherwise, good for everyone
word count: 1,113

( Makoto gradually walked backwards on the roof tiles. )

person: domoto koichi, #oneshot, dc: ooba makoto, rating: pg, group: kinki kids, dc: ruka, person: domoto tsuyoshi, d: ningen shikkaku, #fanfiction, genre: fluff, genre: angst

Comments 10

kat_newsgirl January 4 2009, 21:54:26 UTC

Awww! This was so sweet. I wished that would have really happened in the drama instead of the cruel way it turned out to be. Still liked the drama and you fic.

arashiaddict246 January 4 2009, 22:01:56 UTC

*nods in agreement* such a sad drama :(, i wish this had happened aswel lol
thankyou for reading and commenting ^______^
glad you liked it

fenlings January 5 2009, 01:05:43 UTC

Aww, a fixit yay. I think you could make this fixit even more in tune with Ruka's psycho characterization twisting Ruka's sudden protectiveness just slightly. <3 (I really do love Ruka's ISSUES. Hee.) Oh, BTW, his name is Makoto, not Mokoto.

arashiaddict246 January 5 2009, 02:11:09 UTC

thanks for commenting ^_____^
i don't completly understand Ruka's psycho characterisation completly, i watched the show without subs and don't really understand any japanese, so i just got the jist of it.
and thanks for telling me about the name, i'll change it when i get the opportunity.
Ruka's issues make him one HELL of a character indeed. but i still found him quite sweet when he had lost his marballs completly at the end and called his mouse makoto and was behaving like a small child.

fenlings January 5 2009, 02:36:20 UTC

Love Song's working on subbing it (got the first 3 eps out it looks like) if you feel like suffering through it again, which I so don't.

arashiaddict246 January 5 2009, 02:41:01 UTC

i'd only be able to watch if they were on youtube or veoh. stupid computer can't do downloads. i might watch it again to get a better understanding of what happened and their characters. but it all depends really.
also, i checked an episode and i am pretty sure that his name was Mokoto and not Makoto. so now i'm just confused. lol

Thread 6

elleipsis January 25 2009, 17:21:57 UTC

I really liked this. This is such a sad and heart breaking drama, and I love your fic, if it gives it the chance for something even remotly happy to happen.
I can almost imagine that Ruka thought something like this over and over once it happened...
If only huh?
Thank you for writing, I am glad that someone has written some fanfiction for this drama!!

arashiaddict246 January 25 2009, 17:56:27 UTC

thankyou for reading
i'm glad you enjoyed it
i felt that because it was such a heartbreaking drama, someone had to write something happy for it.
i also think that there is a severe lack of fics for this.
thanks for commenting :)
i'm glad you enjoyed it!