Gift Fic for lilly0

[stormymood]

GIFT FIC for lilly0

Title: Completely Mental
Pairing: Matsumoto Jun x Sakurai Sho, Secondary pairings: Aiba Masaki X Ninomiya Kazunari, NInomiya Kazunari x Ohno Satoshi, (Yoko/Hina if you squint)
Rating: NC-17
Warning: the story happens in a mental institution and it could contain triggering parts.
Summary: Sho is sent away after he tried to off himself.
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[stormymood]

A sparkling Spot for lilly0

[lilly0]

MY STORY! *excited*

WOW! This was good! I love Sakumoto - especially when it's the angstier type of fic! They just totally fit this for me :D

The setting was so interesting! My heart clenched when I read about Jun hurting himself >< And also Nino and his troubles. So sad and painful. All of their stories were sad and touching. I love hurt&comfort fics - it's one of my favourite genres! So, I'm very happy that you chose that.

Sho is an amazing character. He was... okay, he was unsure sometimes and he didn't know what he wanted, but he was strong. When he let Nino seduce him and then fought for Jun's friendship again - he really grew for me here. Sho became such a strong shoulder for Jun to lean on.

I was sad when they got seperate rooms, but they grew closer and more stable then...and got together. I'm really really glad that you showed how they left the hospital and lived together and took normal jobs.

The smut was so hot. I was happy when they finally took that step too.
“Ho-ly-cow!” Nino exclaimed after he turned to see both

[alexxasick]

thanx!!!!
I'm really glad you enjoyed it!!!

[kokkaii]

This is amazing! I loved it! The pacing was a bit slow, and I loved that since there's so much room for Sho and Jun's relationship to develop. I love that there was something between them in most of the fic but Sho only confessed later on.

I adore your characterization of everyone. The psychological illnesses you gave them are spot on.
This is a brilliant fic! Thanks for sharing.

[kokkaii]

I was, but it was a bit different. Someone died in that fic and someone was admitted into an asylum. I'm insanely (pun totally intended) happy someone wrote a mental institution Sakumoto AU for this exchange though!

[yumenosete]

I was so intrigued by the idea of mental institution but stayed because of the steady story this fic has to offer. I never thought of Jun as suicidal but when you gave him a vague past and fear of nanobots, I believed. NINO HAS ANOREXIA OMG and possibly a sex addict while Ohno is forever alone in his thoughts? great job on the cameos too. I found the whole Sakurai confession scenario so sweet and so worth it. ♥

[alexxasick]

hey! thanks for reading and commenting, I'm glad you enjoyed reading it..Though I wanted to tell you Jun was never suicidal, Sho was. Jun hurt himself as part of his disorder, just to feel pain to be sure he wasn't a computer yet.
thanks again!