ARASHI ANON KINK MEME!
ARASHI ANON KINK MEME!
In other words, porn. Kinky porn.
Anon is on, IP logging is off.
1) Request a pairing / threesome / whatever and a kink
2) No pedophilia, please
3) If you see a request you can answer, do it!
4) Have fun! Pimp this out!
5) This is a ARASHI MEME, so at least one person HAS to be a member of ARASHI. Other Japanese actors/musicians/ ( Read more... )
In other words, porn. Kinky porn.
Anon is on, IP logging is off.
1) Request a pairing / threesome / whatever and a kink
2) No pedophilia, please
3) If you see a request you can answer, do it!
4) Have fun! Pimp this out!
5) This is a ARASHI MEME, so at least one person HAS to be a member of ARASHI. Other Japanese actors/musicians/ ( Read more... )
That was really hot, so well writen and I feel the characterizations are perfect, at least that is the image I have of them, I enjoyed a lot Nino-Jun conversation at the start and all Jun's kind of no thinking while thinking, if you know what I mean.
About your ending note, I honestly was thinking about the other option, the Jun-Aiba, after all they are my OTP, not really that they end up in a pair and a thresome, but just Jun loving Aiba, perhaps with him not really noticing it but his body does or he kind of loves all of them but the most intimate act he cand do it only with Aiba, because he loves him in a special way. Your option it's pretty interesting anyway, but I had to confess that at the Juntoshi part my heart sank a little, why Jun didnt hid his eyes with Ohno?, why he didnt let Sho, but with Ohno he did? is this a Juntoshi fic? but then I didnt felt exactly as Jun loved Ohno but like Ohno helped Jun to open to all of them, like he always do it with Aiba because he was the first and he felt sure with him and not the others, but why he felt sure with Ohno and not with Sho?
I love porn like this, not only hot but with a meaning behind it, something like making me think, so I think mission accomplished, lol, but either way I woul LOVE to read the other option if you feel like writing it.
LOVE YOU, THANK YOU SO MUCH again.
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Aaah, I failed in my writing though. (;_;) I made it too vague. And I apologize for sinking your heart! I did worry about spending too much time on the Juntoshi portion, since clearly you wanted Junba, but since that was the climax, so to speak and forgive the terrible pun, I put some extra focus there. The story I was trying to write was one of Jun who does have a special place in his heart for Aiba, who he trusts and loves just a bit more than the rest, but he still learns to open up finally around the other three with Ohno being the one to figure out that maybe Jun is the most comfortable bottoming when no one else is around watching. Then Aiba catches on which is where the last section comes from. I should have made all of that clearer within the fic itself and I'm sorry that I didn't. I'll keep your feedback in mind when I try my hand at your prompt again and hopefully hit closer to your ideal!
Thank you so much for reading and replying!
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Dont apologize, plese, you wrote a wonderful fic even if it was not what I thought about, my prompt was also not so clear, I should have state that Jun loved Aiba.
And lol, we really didnt understand each other, as you wrote "He didn't think he was in love with Aiba. At least, he wasn't more in love with him than anyone else.", and that "He told himself there wasn't any special reason he had picked Aiba. The other three had been occupied: Nino on his back with Ohno's mouth wrapped around his cock, Sho working his fingers inside of Ohno at the same time." I thought Jun really didnt feel anything special for Aiba, just that he trusted him as he was so good with him the first time, I thought about the embarrasement, but he could make it with Sho hidding his eyes with his arm as he usually does with Aiba, and as Nino narrated in his ear how it hurts at first and then Sho is so in pain at his first time I thought he was afraid and he wanted to do it only with Aiba because he doesnt hurt him and then Riida shows Jun how he can trust all of them.
Thanks for trying again, sorry for the long comment and THANK YOU AGAIN, you are an awesome writer.
BTW did you write fics before?, I noticed you created coffeeinacan the day before to post it, the funny thing is that the post has the date Aug. 25th, 2011 and it says the community was created the 26, lol, anyway I would like to read more from you ^_^
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Also I don't know if you still check here since it's been so long, but I am still trying to write a fic closer to your original prompt. It's giving me some trouble but I hope to be able to post it on arashirabu when I'm done with it.
I noticed that about the journal date and I don't know why it says the 26th.... I did make it on the 25th! XD The only Arashi fandom fic I wrote before this was an Ohmiya anon prompt on here. This fic got long, so I decided to put it in a journal instead of cutting it up into comments.
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Lol, LJ is weird like that! did you write for other fandoms then?
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