[Fanfiction] The Beat that My Heart Skipped

Jan 18, 2015 21:00

Title: The Beat that My Heart Skipped
Author: Aragarna
Characters: Peter, Neal
Genre, rating: hurt/comfort, gen, PG-13
Spoilers: none
word count: ~1300
beta: my infinite gratitude to anodyneer for the beta work.
Summary: Peter had told Neal to stay in the car
Author's Note: Since it's monday already overseas, I can post now. This is my birthday gift for my ( Read more... )

fanfic, white collar, neal caffrey, peter burke

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elrhiarhodan January 19 2015, 03:52:50 UTC
Love it!

Why am I not surprised that coffee saved Neal's life!

And yeah, I can understand your annoyance. So much pain... for fifteen minutes.

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aragarna January 19 2015, 16:45:38 UTC
Thank you!! :)

heee yeah. Damn show! ;)

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reve_silencieux January 19 2015, 04:27:39 UTC
Awww... our poor guys! Yeah, I bet that was hard on Peter - but whew! Thank goodness for Neal's ADD tendencies. :D

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aragarna January 19 2015, 16:46:19 UTC
LOL yeah, thank god, Neal never listens.
Thank you!! :)

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pooh_collector January 19 2015, 05:34:31 UTC
Excellent! I felt the tension. Poor Peter thinking that Neal had been killed and then poor Neal for the turnabout. Angsty goodness all around.

Only Neal could survive and explosion because he needed to make a coffee run.

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aragarna January 19 2015, 16:47:09 UTC
Thank you!! :)

*pets the boys*

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sheenianni January 19 2015, 06:03:59 UTC
LOL, of course it was the coffee...

*Hugs Peter and Neal. Good thing Neal never stays put in the car!

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aragarna January 19 2015, 16:48:01 UTC
heee I guess for once they'll both be grateful Neal never listens...

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maryrose_it January 19 2015, 06:42:00 UTC
lovely!! "stay in the car !" eheh is not in Neal's dictionary!

how they survived for a whole year without each other....poor boys !

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aragarna January 19 2015, 16:49:11 UTC
thank you!! :)

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