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SM Monthly Submission - Kaidou

Jun 20, 2009 10:38

Title: If Only She Knew
Author: Arabian Red
Theme: Kaidou
Genre: Adult
Version: AR
Rating: NC-17

NOTES: Interlude to Photograph and Spider but could stand alone.

( Mad dash to kill off prompts! )

rei, kaidou

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venusorbit1 June 20 2009, 21:55:23 UTC

HOLY SHIT.

MAN, your Kaidou is one creepy assed mofo! It was HIM who ordered that hit?? Well, his wife, but by extension...WHAT THE FUCK. That is so...perfect and ARRRGGH now it all fits! Oh shit Rei is going to go fucking postal on him, for good reason, and...DAMN. DAMN DAMN DAMN. DAMN you have reduced me to incoherent blathering! SHit, that was a good twist. I was wondering who it would be..for some reason I thought it would be Mamoru (hurrr..my theories are always off) and you had me going for a little bit: I thought Kaidou was fucking MINAKO at the beginning and my eyeballs popped out of my head and rolled away.

She doesn’t need your help. … he wanted her, more than he would ever care to admit.GREAT PARAGRAPH. Sums up all of his inner turmoil nicely. He's still a cocksucking shit, though ( ... )

arabianred June 21 2009, 00:10:08 UTC

LOL. I think making the blonde Minako would have been too much. I needed the wife to be a cold, manipulative bitch, and I didn't want to subject Minako to that. Although, it would have made an interesting story as to how she sought out Malachite.

Everyone seems to be obsessed with Rei in this series. I'm glad it threw you for a loop, though. And yeah, I think Kaidou's inaction makes him just as guilty.

And slobber all you like! ;) I'm really glad that you like it, and that the whole thing worked for you. I wasn't sure how Kaidou's obsession would be recieved.

As for R/J smut? Give me some more inspiration, girl! It's supposed to be 'Vibrator,' as a prequel to Forbidden, but it's giving me trouble. Bleh.

lovelylytton June 21 2009, 13:21:36 UTC

Although, it would have made an interesting story as to how she sought out Malachite.
Argh, now that I would have loved to read! All of the UST paired with ambition and weapons and general evilness, my mouth waters just thinking about it.

arabianred June 21 2009, 16:16:02 UTC

Ah yes, that is something I would be very tempted to write. I'm still trying to work Minako somehow into Malachite's backstory, though. And sorry, UST? ^^;

lovelylytton June 22 2009, 05:31:40 UTC

UST is Unresolved Sexual Tension. Not that it would remain unresolved for a long time with those two. *g*

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