Thank you! I love this comment - I kind of want to roll around in it. I'm super happy that you enjoyed the story enough to want to re-read it in the future!
I love this story and agree that it was right for Jensen to choose not regain his memory and make a fresh start. The journey was well worth the travel and I loved every part of it. Definitely one for memories.
AAAHHHH!!! SUCH A FANTASTICAL READ!! In every sense of the word! I freaking loved it :D
Jared, Jensen, Gen and Alona were all so awesome. I loved snarky Alona and emotional Gen (she was the only one I had a tiny suspicion who she could be, because of her characterization) and the journey, THE JOURNEY. Your brain is one hell of a mystical being. SO MANY IDEAS!! The places they went, the people they met. And I had to smile after a while, because everywhere they went...
'Tell us your story.' 'It's a long one.' 'Well, we have time.'
I can't even tell you all the things I loved! I would start in the beginning with Jensen standing naked in the forest and end with Jensen making his choice and I would mention everything in between. It would blow this comment :D
I LOVED IT!! SO MUCH :D
P.S. Wait, wait, I need to mention this. I freaking loved the dreams, written in first person of all four. That was perfect!!
Aw, thank you!! Haha I was wondering if anyone was going to call me out on the "it's a long story" thing. I imagine that after a while it'd get annoying to have to tell people who/what you were and everything that came with it - I think saying "it's a long story" eventually became code for "do I really have to rehash this again?" Maybe I should have added a scene with them bickering over whose turn it was to tell the story. I can totally see Alona calling "not it". Maybe in the revisions - that is, if I decided to turn this into original fic.
Also it makes me ridiculously happy that you liked the dreams! I wanted to give glimpses of the backstory and after wracking my brain I figured out that the only way to do so without spoiling the story would be to do it in 1st person narrative. I was a little nervous about it because 1st person POV doesn't seem to go over well in fandom.
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Jared, Jensen, Gen and Alona were all so awesome. I loved snarky Alona and emotional Gen (she was the only one I had a tiny suspicion who she could be, because of her characterization) and the journey, THE JOURNEY. Your brain is one hell of a mystical being. SO MANY IDEAS!! The places they went, the people they met. And I had to smile after a while, because everywhere they went...
'Tell us your story.'
'It's a long one.'
'Well, we have time.'
I can't even tell you all the things I loved! I would start in the beginning with Jensen standing naked in the forest and end with Jensen making his choice and I would mention everything in between. It would blow this comment :D
I LOVED IT!! SO MUCH :D
P.S. Wait, wait, I need to mention this. I freaking loved the dreams, written in first person of all four. That was perfect!!
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Also it makes me ridiculously happy that you liked the dreams! I wanted to give glimpses of the backstory and after wracking my brain I figured out that the only way to do so without spoiling the story would be to do it in 1st person narrative. I was a little nervous about it because 1st person POV doesn't seem to go over well in fandom.
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This was a fantastic story, thank you.
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