The Devil Don't Live Here: Redux

Jan 22, 2014 14:14

DISCLAIMER: This is a work of fiction, and the characters portrayed within (while bearing familiar names and likenesses) are also completely fictional. This is not real and none of it ever happened. Read at your own risk (and only if you are of an age to view explicit material).
Rating: So, So Very Much NC-17
Pairing: J2
Word Count: 6,737
Warnings: ( Read more... )

nc-17, rps, fan-fic

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Comments 19

somer January 24 2014, 20:45:08 UTC
This whole story was just as HOT as the one from Jensen's POV. And I knew Jared was the good guy but I can't believe how adorable he really was. Drinking the pink milk, singing along to Britney Spears.

Loved the additional scenes we got from this. The one at his mom's house, the one in that rest stop bathroom, the porn shop one!

Thank you for writing it from Jared's view. Loved it :)

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ar_richardson January 24 2014, 23:23:45 UTC
Oh, I'm relieved you thought that this part was just as good as the first! I was hoping it wouldn't come across as simply redundant. I mean, I did use copy and paste a few times, but I was really trying to give it a very different feel from the first one. Thanks for reading and commenting!

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skeletncloset January 26 2014, 06:53:18 UTC
Dude, Jared's POV WAS HILARIOUS. Jensen was so full of angst and then you have Jared . . . I love it!!!

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ar_richardson January 26 2014, 19:31:42 UTC
:D

Awesome, I'm glad you like it! I felt Jensen needed someone carefree and a bit goofy to balance out the angst.

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skeletncloset January 26 2014, 20:11:12 UTC
I want a timestamp or something, because both Jared and I deserve a reward.

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reggie11 January 31 2014, 07:26:59 UTC
There are very few A/B/O stories that I like - it's just not my thing, but the summary intrigued me. So glad I read these; both stories were great. I loved how you made omegas an actual third gender. The whole thing was really hot but also incredibly sweet.

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ar_richardson January 31 2014, 07:44:46 UTC
Thank you! Honestly there are few A/B/O stories that I like and I never thought I'd write one, but the prompt grabbed my attention and the muse demanded I write it, so here it is! Thanks again for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it. :)

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firesign10 April 16 2014, 02:14:38 UTC
Really liked both pieces, and would be curious as to where they go from here!

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ar_richardson April 16 2014, 04:12:45 UTC
Thanks! There will most likely be more once these whole big bang and meant to be challenges are over :)

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adameyezd May 26 2014, 23:37:00 UTC

Oh, dear lord PLEASE continue with this story!!

I also found the next part of this fic, A Quiet Interlude, on your AO3 account & read that.

They just gotta get together for Jensen's next heat (don't let him take the suppresents yet!!) & have HOT SEX (without Jared getting into any trouble!) & they have to stay together forever!

I really enjoyed both POV's, which were equally hot to me!

Thank you so much for writing this!

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ar_richardson May 27 2014, 13:23:14 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting! I appreciate it. I do plan on continuing this story once my other obligations are out of the way. I have a few ideas for where I want to go with this, and yes they will get together! LOL I have something special in mind for Jensen's next heat! :)

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