Distractions

Aug 18, 2012 12:39

Title: Distractions
Author: nixmom
Rating: T
Word Count: 300

A/N: Hey all. After a month of vacation related activities I finally cracked open a new doc and tried to work my way through the layers of rust on my writing tools.  This is a sequel to a fic I wrote for redrockcan on her birthday.  It can be found here.

A special thanks to my ever diligent beta, afrakaday, for ( Read more... )

non-challenge drabble, author: nixmom

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hollywobbles August 18 2012, 17:22:29 UTC
PLEASE SAY YOU AREN'T LEAVING IT THERE!!!!!

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hollywobbles August 18 2012, 18:12:38 UTC
*cough* I mean, This was thoroughly lovely. I so enjoyed it. :)

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nixmom August 18 2012, 18:41:44 UTC
"I'm not leaving it there."

Feel better?

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hollywobbles August 18 2012, 18:43:20 UTC
Somehow not....

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fragrantwoods August 18 2012, 21:11:00 UTC
This looks the beginning of something very happy :-) The banter is perfect and sweet, and ends on such a promising note.

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nixmom August 19 2012, 05:29:35 UTC
I think because they ended so tragically in canon, I gravitate towards giving them something happy, but we'll see where it goes.

Thanks for the comment about the banter. When I started writing a year agoish...maybe a year and a half now...dialogue scared me, so I am always happy when it works for people.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

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bsg_aussiegirl August 18 2012, 21:22:39 UTC
She remembered it clearly now from when they sat and talked until the bartender kicked them out, remembering the way it rolled over her when they realized they were actually staying in adjoining rooms. Is this a hint that they had secksy times back on Picon? I'm sure they can start things up where they left off no trouble. ;)

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nixmom August 19 2012, 05:30:26 UTC
You and your one track mind!!! But yes, I think I will fill in that gap...ya know just so people aren't wondering what happened.

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k_d_456_345_a August 18 2012, 22:36:59 UTC
So pleasingly light and fun with just the hint of mystery to why they'd let it go two years!

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nixmom August 19 2012, 05:31:36 UTC
:)

Nice to see you K!!! I hope you are well. yes, the hint of mystery. I never know if it's best to fill it in or let your imaginations fill in the blanks.

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redrockcan August 19 2012, 02:16:49 UTC
Very nice continuation!! Nothing wrong with posting 100 drabbles instead of a longer story!! Nothing at all!! :)

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nixmom August 19 2012, 05:32:53 UTC
LOL!!!! 100 drabbles or long fic. Both sound daunting right now.

Glad you liked the follow up to your b-day fic.

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