The Test

Nov 23, 2011 06:36

Title: The Test
Author: marzipanilla
Rating: pg
Notes: Swear, I'll stop spamming you guys after this one. This is just me cleaning up this AU's canon. The meat and potatoes of Bill 'n Laura will be returned to in the next drabble. Hopefully after I get some sleep.
Sequel to The Cure and Processing
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author: marzipanilla, series: cylon bill, challenge 086: skinjobs

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akachankami November 23 2011, 14:47:29 UTC
(*O*) my poor dear laura shaking with rage and illness and... fear?

clever point of view! =D LOL i love clueless frightened gaius XD even in her 'deathbed' laura would made him shit his pants XD of course he understood nothing

"Get out," her voice was deathly soft.
*hugs laura*

THANK YOU! *hugs new friend and her cylon bill series* =D ♥

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marzipanilla November 23 2011, 20:43:19 UTC
Hee. -is hugged-

Out of curiosity, when do you see this taking place? I was trying to sueeze it in relatively close to Crossroads- I'm just wondering what people are imagining. Of course, I just realized that would mean Kara should be running aeound, screaming about them going the wrong way.. Hm. -suddenly has an idea-

Oh Gaius.. because this is a drabble I had to cut out the whole bit where he walks into the room- more terror, and a call back to LDYB there. And Laura yells at him a bit more xD

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akachankami November 23 2011, 20:54:18 UTC
(*O*) i ♥ new ideas XD yay!!!!!

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akachankami November 23 2011, 20:56:04 UTC
ooooops forgot: i also see it early in season4, she just started the therapy and has all her beautiful hair

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bsgroxmysox November 23 2011, 15:29:05 UTC
Wow! I check in on lj during a break at work and I find these wonderful drabbles! This idea for an a/u is very intriguing. Bill is Daniel......*dead*

Laura's reactions so far have been so very Laura. Which makes me sad but in a good way. As the icon says, these drabbles are full of angsty goodness!

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marzipanilla November 23 2011, 20:47:10 UTC
Bill is Daniel..

I think you're the only person who has commented on that. -laugh- I didn't want him to be one of the Five (he wouldn't know enough about himsef) and I figured, this late in the game I couldn't have him be just another model. Plus, this just a whole new layer to his and the Tighs' relationship.

Angsty goodness ftw!

Thank you for reading :)

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bsgroxmysox November 23 2011, 21:19:28 UTC
I think you're the only person who has commented on that - Really? I love that he wasn't one of the final five or a sleeper but that he knew all along, it completely changes everything and makes me think about him in a totally different way.

And I just thought of this: HOW IS LEE GOING TO REACT!?! His mood swings are gonna double now!

You've made me think thinky thoughts! Now I must spend hours watching videos of cats on youtube to once more turn my brain to mush.

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marzipanilla November 23 2011, 21:39:44 UTC
Bill being a sleeper would be too easy. Here, I get to play the 'you were lying to us' card.

Bwahaha -has evil plans for Lee-

Yea for thinking thoughts! May I recommend the hour (or potentially three hour, I don't remember right now) nyan cat video? Garunteed to make goo fall out of your ears.

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somadanne November 23 2011, 15:30:42 UTC
This series is really intriguing, and I particularly like this confrontation between Laura and Gaius about his cylon detector. I would love to have seen this!

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marzipanilla November 23 2011, 20:50:04 UTC
Canonically someone needed to call Baltar on the detector.. It seems to get thouroughly ignored later in the series- I believe Tigh makes an offhand comment about Baltar possibly fudging results- but no one ever does anything about it. 'course, here Laura is just on a fact finding mission.

Thank you for reading.

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afrakaday November 23 2011, 20:04:12 UTC
Excellent drabble series! Cylon Bill, whoa! This is seriously intense stuff. And I just love how it loops back to the TMU, TMD confrontation, because that was a great scene and obviously remained relevant far into the series. And growling, roaring Laura is so perfect. She's pissed at Bill but remained vulnerable around him, but with Gaius she's in full ass-kicking mode.

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marzipanilla November 23 2011, 20:55:51 UTC
-thinks about growling Laura- Rawr (sorry, I really haven't slept enough)

Yea, sort-of-falling-apart Laura is fun to write, especially concerning her relationship with Bill. She's so determined she's getting a bit desperate- so luckily Gaius is a bit too distracted by death-by-presidential-glare to put two and two together.

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cynicalangel88 November 23 2011, 23:18:08 UTC
I’m loving this AU series you’re creating; I’m glad you decided to expand on your original drabble. The idea of Cylon!Bill fascinates me and I’m eager to see what all you do with it. In this drabble specifically I like how you had Laura call Baltar out on his ‘Cylon detector’. The inconsistencies with that thing in canon always bugged me. And Laura scaring the crap out of Baltar is always a good thing too. So, well done and keep ‘em coming.

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marzipanilla November 24 2011, 07:34:15 UTC
Cylon!Bill really is intruiging- in this particular niche, there's quite a few cylon!Laura stories, but very few (that I've found) that go the other way. Probably because most people were looking for an excuse for her not to be dead.

-sigh- There's also his detection method (considerably shorter than 11 hours) from the mini which gets ignored.

Everyone seems to really dig Laura scaring Baltar -laugh-

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