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Captured

Mar 30, 2006 23:54

Title: Captured
Author: aquila_star
Pairing(s): James and Lily
Rating: PG
Summary: Just a Kiss. Jame's POV Companion to Caught

( He could not believe this was happening. )

het!fic, james/lily, marauders

Comments 5

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aquila_star April 2 2006, 00:03:53 UTC

Thanks so much! :D I'm glad his arrogance came across, I was worried it hadn't, plus the fact that his feelings are genuine, regardless of his ego. ;D

Awesome feedback, thanks. Oh, and I fixed the typo. I really thought I have got them all.

Typos are tough, and more so because I usually write late at night, even a spell checker and 15 rereads don't always catch them After all, I know what it's meant to say yk?

aquila_star April 2 2006, 00:07:17 UTC

Oh, I also wanted to mention how I wanted to convey that he was shaken...he'd been so sure all those years, but her lack of response was finally starting to worry him. Anyway...yeah. :D

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Thread 5

cybeleadam July 15 2006, 10:15:12 UTC

This is as great as the other version. I really, really like the way you write. I'm so glad you read and comment my Sirius/Remus, allowing me to know you and your fics. ^_^
See you soon for a comment about another story.

aquila_star July 15 2006, 17:05:47 UTC

Heehee, thanks so much:D I'm very glad you enjoy them.:D I'm glad I read yours too! New friend and a great fic. ;) What's not to like? XD

Cheers.