Comments | aquila_star: Heaven is lost.

aquila_star

Heaven is lost.

Mar 22, 2006 23:02

My Mum and Dad SquickFic for flamewarrior is coming along...hopefully with some time to work on it I can have it ready in a week or so.

Well, I actually had some inspiration for the prompt at marauders100 this week. So without further beating around the bush, here it is.

Title: Heaven is Lost
Characters:Remus
Challenge:#3 Fishsticks
Rating:G
Word Count: 200

( Fish sticks and carrots )

slash!fic, marauders, remus/sirius, drabbles

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ellie_nor March 23 2006, 18:49:22 UTC

Oh, beautiful. I'm looking forward to your challenge fic :-)

(P.S. spelling note - it's aisle, not isle, in this context)

aquila_star March 23 2006, 20:53:23 UTC

Ooop, thank you! Darn that spell checker, my eyes don't catch it at 2am!! XD Oh,and I found that Sirius is not dessert, he is a desert. Ooops.

Hopefully my challange fic will end up as eloquent...that's the real challenge.

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aquila_star March 23 2006, 20:55:35 UTC

I mourn Sirius' bad decisions every day. So many of them, and how they shaped all their lives. Hhmmm...fic fodder?? Darnit no, I have enough going on and too little time to write! Sheesh.

Thank you. :D

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aquila_star March 23 2006, 23:04:12 UTC

Yeah, I can't give in to every idea. I have alot less time than most it seems. I can really only write when my girl is asleep, which she is right now! I just went over my squickfic, added a bunch, took some out. I will leave it for a few hours now, sometimes I have to leave it alone in order to come back and see better what I had wanted. My fingers just run away from me sometimes.

Drabbles are always nice to read. Short but sweet. :D

cybeleadam July 17 2006, 13:18:33 UTC

The end is sad but the rest is rather funny... Well, not that much since Remus is practically starving (just like me now... I have only corn flakes for lunch *sighs*)... But it's a very nice little fic. ^_^ I really like the way you wrote it.

P.S. I want fish sticks and carrots (I would add potato purée), with ice cream in dessert! It's definitely still heaven at 29. ^^

aquila_star July 17 2006, 23:40:54 UTC

Thanks. Poor Remus, this time period always gets me in the gut, so when I want angst, I write about it.

It makes me miss Sirius.

cybeleadam July 18 2006, 10:23:28 UTC

If you miss Sirius, you should write something about him. ^^

aquila_star July 18 2006, 19:28:20 UTC

I've been thinking about that for along time...it's funny that it's usually Remus' voice I write, in this time period at least. I do have one fic on the go that is mostly through Sirius, and another that's done that is his POV, but they're a whole different time.

I'm going to ponder Sirius a bit here, and see if I can't come up with something soon. :)

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