On Chapter 2 of Guilt
I GOT AN A FOR MY SPEAKING AND LISTENING ASSESSMENT!!!
WHOOHOOO!
And I got an A for my Physics exam. Plus, the person to whom Guilt chapter 2 was given, read it and gave her comments to me. She said that it was very well written and that she couldn't think of anything that I could have done better! All she found was a few grammatical errors which I shall be taking note of in case I make those mistakes again. But it could stand alone very well.
So all I've got to do is correct a few grammatical mistakes.
And my cousin who read it said that both chapters read well: and that my writing style was very good - very descriptive and that it captures real emotion and expresses the emotion very well. And that she'd like to read more of my work - as well as more of Guilt, and that I'd make an excellent writer - she' d definitely read my books. Whoohoo!
My friend said that it was really engaging and that there was a trail of suspense going through it.
I hope everyone else will be just as pleased with it - I don't care about getting many reviews but if you do stop by here before reading it and reviewing it, please give me a detailed review - be it critique or praise. I don't mind if it's sweet and short, though.
So...
Look out for Guilt, chapter 2, this week!
WHOOHOOO!
And I got an A for my Physics exam. Plus, the person to whom Guilt chapter 2 was given, read it and gave her comments to me. She said that it was very well written and that she couldn't think of anything that I could have done better! All she found was a few grammatical errors which I shall be taking note of in case I make those mistakes again. But it could stand alone very well.
So all I've got to do is correct a few grammatical mistakes.
And my cousin who read it said that both chapters read well: and that my writing style was very good - very descriptive and that it captures real emotion and expresses the emotion very well. And that she'd like to read more of my work - as well as more of Guilt, and that I'd make an excellent writer - she' d definitely read my books. Whoohoo!
My friend said that it was really engaging and that there was a trail of suspense going through it.
I hope everyone else will be just as pleased with it - I don't care about getting many reviews but if you do stop by here before reading it and reviewing it, please give me a detailed review - be it critique or praise. I don't mind if it's sweet and short, though.
So...
Look out for Guilt, chapter 2, this week!