I just wanted to say, that Damaged...is a very very little bit better than the most awesome thing in the universe. ❤ Thank you so much for writing it :D
I have so many things to say and now I finally have an LJ to ^^
I like CM's revenge in the prologue - Homin & JYJ hatred isn't often included, but it makes the story more realistic, as did the awkwardness when OT5 met.
And YJ's characters. All the positive & negative aspects, you summarized it in a concise way, funny and angsty, and kept it consistent throughout the story. Yay for YH fighting back against possessive bitchy Jae, who btw is hilarious.
Jae's love was conveyed really well, like how he wouldn't let anyone fuck him, sacrificing his face to stay by YH's side (all the more significant cos Jae is so vain here). Jae is unbelievably selfish in this fic, but so much more relatable to!
My favourite lines: "Jae bends easily and with the most amount of angst possible, but he doesn’t break.." I think it's really applicable to Jae IRL.
I loved Kyuwook too! The bunnies...btw is Kyuwook meant to be a parallel of the old YJ? And Heechul's epic war with Jae ^^
So sorry for the wordy msg ;_; I think I misquoted a lot cos I didn't refer to the story
I can't believe that you have dyslexia :O don't worry there were very few errors :)
Oh & I was wondering...could I friend you? :P I can't check LJ much (LIFE) & I really want to read your updates asap :D your writing is therapy from life. Idk how this works on LJ though is friending like FB? :P
THANKYOU for being an inspiration :) Hope that your muses (and you) stay healthy!
I just wanted to say, that Damaged...is a very very little bit better than the most awesome thing in the universe. ❤ Thank you so much for writing it :D
I have so many things to say and now I finally have an LJ to ^^
I like CM's revenge in the prologue - Homin & JYJ hatred isn't often included, but it makes the story more realistic, as did the awkwardness when OT5 met.
And YJ's characters. All the positive & negative aspects, you summarized it in a concise way, funny and angsty, and kept it consistent throughout the story. Yay for YH fighting back against possessive bitchy Jae, who btw is hilarious.
Jae's love was conveyed really well, like how he wouldn't let anyone fuck him, sacrificing his face to stay by YH's side (all the more significant cos Jae is so vain here). Jae is unbelievably selfish in this fic, but so much more relatable to!
My favourite lines: "Jae bends easily and with the most amount of angst possible, but he doesn’t break.." I think it's really applicable to Jae IRL.
I loved Kyuwook too! The bunnies...btw is Kyuwook meant to be a parallel of the old YJ? And Heechul's epic war with Jae ^^
So sorry for the wordy msg ;_; I think I misquoted a lot cos I didn't refer to the story
I can't believe that you have dyslexia :O don't worry there were very few errors :)
Oh & I was wondering...could I friend you? :P I can't check LJ much (LIFE) & I really want to read your updates asap :D your writing is therapy from life. Idk how this works on LJ though is friending like FB? :P
THANKYOU for being an inspiration :) Hope that your muses (and you) stay healthy!
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Thank you so much for enjoying Damaged. I am glad you liked it. Also thank you for your support. I am touched you got a journal.
I am kinda sixteen pages behind when it comes to replying to Damaged comments so I will leave it at that. Thank you!
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