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aquafi

Fruits Basket FanFic

Mar 20, 2005 00:22

Okay. *sigh* I have written my first fanfic. Please do not laugh, or at least do not tell me if you do laugh, lol. Anyway, it's three in the morning so I'm going to leave it where it is, despite the fact that it's disorganized and leaves off rather suddenly. I have much to learn about writing. -_ ( Read more... )

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teddybeargurl March 20 2005, 22:49:28 UTC

well. i like it! so there. i think you ARE pretty good at it! and DONT argue with me!

aquafi March 22 2005, 18:09:24 UTC

Thanks Heather.

teddybeargurl March 22 2005, 19:00:18 UTC

welcome! :D

jiffy_pop March 22 2005, 05:42:53 UTC

Aw, I really liked the ending. :) It put a big smile on my face.... and well, you heard my reaction, actually.

Hehe, anyway- that was a very good first fanfic. And Hatori/Tohru! ::sniff:: You're so kind!

aquafi March 22 2005, 18:20:13 UTC

Honestly? You thought it was good for a first attempt? Thanks. :)
Okay, then give me the criticisms. If it's worth the effort to write more, I need to know what I need to work on. *sigh* give them to me one at a time, so that you don't overwhelm me. lol.