omg. omgomg. I can't even begin to express how beautiful this was ;A; ♥♥♥ FanXing's story was beautiful and so was TaoChen... omg they were so tragic ;_____; wait but at the end they were together right? Wasn't Tao what Fanxing asked as a reward when they ended up at Baekhyun's palace? And Zitao decided to throw himself out of the sky again? Or have I gone completely off the tangent there? And Baekhyun lifted the curse after he resigned and let Joonmyun take his place? Ooh so many questions but this AU was simply amazing, I loved everyone's involvement in the story, even the side pairings that I normally don't ship...
thank you ;; tbh i wasn't expecting any comments since the fic is very long, and it already had its fair share of loving back at the exchange when it was posted, so i'm really glad you stopped by to red it <3
yes, fanxing asked for tao's freedom in the end. and baekhyun lifted the curse because i'm a sucker for happy endings. and maybe i forgot to post the bonus chapter at the end about fanxing ahahah too late
/rereads her own reply/ i can't believe i've managed to typo even in the replies lmao i need a personal beta to proofread everything i write
it's really short and dumb and i wanted to write more but it disrupted the rhythm of the story and nope. i'll edit this later into the rest of the fic probablyit's set before the epilogue at baekhyun's castle
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I've forgotten how I ended here but I feel so fortunate that I did.
This is by far one of the most lovely fics I've ever encountered. I read through its entirety in one sitting after work and consumed a whole bag of oranges while doing so. You possess such finesse with your diction and storytelling technique.
What really got me hooked were the sentiments throughout....the fear, the longing, the bittersweet taste of anticipation. And how each character progressed so vividly, maturing without themselves even knowing. Yifan and Yixing are the epitome of love found and affections earned.
Thank you for ending the tale with so much hope. Ten years is a very long time for Jongdae to yearn for his star.
I'm sorry for the extremely late reply, but your comment is one of the most lovely thing I've ever read and I want to hit myself for not answering earlier. This has been my first attempt at an exchange thing and in the exchange this fic was almost ignored, so I'm just immensely happy to read positive comments, even if it's been ages ;; Thank you <3
OMG I CAN'T fanxing! taochen! xiuhan ;_;! baekyeol ;_;;;! My heart throbbed so many times I've lost count but it was beautiful ♥ And I'm really glad there's happy ending for everyone /sobs Although baekyeol are not main characters, I felt so sad about them, gosh! тт тт
/when you find comments from five months ago and now you know that person and you you fail at being casual about the fact that you never answered them/
I love stories like this which start and end with the same paragraph it just evokes so many emotions in you as a prelude then as a conclusion the whole ride I was wondering who the hell was going to become the new king you make it so hard to guess ;; fanxing in this story is exceptionally lovely and I loved how yixing was trying his best to stay away from Yifan and then he lost his powers ( and he was talking about how unicorns would lose their powers when they lose control over strong emotions and I just knew! He fell! In love! With Yi fan! I love how they became so comfortable with each other (the little scene the night after they found the other two was so cute when they were just kissing and looking at the stars my heart was squeezing
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no happy ending for baekyeol lmao i'm sorry, this wasn't their fic. it was actually written for a fanxing fest so ofc the fanxing gets the most action. (i used to be such a big fanxing stan a long time ago...)
OFC BAEK IS ALWAYS GOOD DON'T EVER DOUBT IT :D baekhyun gets the best role. the end. there's nothing else to say c:
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FanXing's story was beautiful and so was TaoChen... omg they were so tragic ;_____; wait but at the end they were together right? Wasn't Tao what Fanxing asked as a reward when they ended up at Baekhyun's palace? And Zitao decided to throw himself out of the sky again? Or have I gone completely off the tangent there? And Baekhyun lifted the curse after he resigned and let Joonmyun take his place? Ooh so many questions but this AU was simply amazing, I loved everyone's involvement in the story, even the side pairings that I normally don't ship...
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yes, fanxing asked for tao's freedom in the end. and baekhyun lifted the curse because i'm a sucker for happy endings. and maybe i forgot to post the bonus chapter at the end about fanxing ahahah too late
thank you <3
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it's really short and dumb and i wanted to write more but it disrupted the rhythm of the story and nope. i'll edit this later into the rest of the fic probablyit's set before the epilogue at baekhyun's castle ( ... )
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I read on my phone so I didn't get around to commenting on the fest posting. ^^;;
Too cute/funny that epilogue! ^___^
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thank you for commenting here, though, it made me really happy!
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This is by far one of the most lovely fics I've ever encountered. I read through its entirety in one sitting after work and consumed a whole bag of oranges while doing so. You possess such finesse with your diction and storytelling technique.
What really got me hooked were the sentiments throughout....the fear, the longing, the bittersweet taste of anticipation. And how each character progressed so vividly, maturing without themselves even knowing. Yifan and Yixing are the epitome of love found and affections earned.
Thank you for ending the tale with so much hope. Ten years is a very long time for Jongdae to yearn for his star.
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fanxing! taochen! xiuhan ;_;! baekyeol ;_;;;!
My heart throbbed so many times I've lost count but it was beautiful ♥
And I'm really glad there's happy ending for everyone /sobs
Although baekyeol are not main characters, I felt so sad about them, gosh! тт тт
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ty ilu ♥
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but! i'm still so sad about that super angsty baekyeol and i've just remembered their line clearly ;;;;;;;;
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OFC BAEK IS ALWAYS GOOD DON'T EVER DOUBT IT :D baekhyun gets the best role. the end. there's nothing else to say c:
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