Comments | aprilclash: Extra Time (Tempo Supplementare) 2/2

aprilclash

Extra Time (Tempo Supplementare) 2/2

Apr 27, 2014 15:42

Title: Extra Time (Tempo Supplementare) 2/2

( The referee whistled, announcing a substitution for the opposing team, and the entire stadium exploded as Lu Han ran in the field, ready to shine. )

pairing: xiuhan, writing: bday gift, *fic:exo

Comments 46

mooosapi April 27 2014, 16:26:52 UTC

this is amazing.
you are amazing.
it's 1am here so i'll leave a proper comment in the morning. xoxo

aprilclash April 27 2014, 19:41:18 UTC

/blushes until she melts/ amazing? me? nonono /puddle of feels/

thank you ♥

mooosapi June 5 2014, 02:48:16 UTC

I promised I'll give you a proper comment ;) sorry this is so late

first, where I need to start....let's start with the fact that minseok's fav club = luhan's rival club lololol
Thank you, destiny, for playing pranks on me.
minseok's life is so hard bruh

“Try with Xiumin. Kim Xiumin. Scrap that, try Baozi.”
minseok's life is so hard vol. II

They therefore made sure to tease him, especially now that they had managed by some miracle to crush his favourite team in an official match for Champions League ranking.
minseok's life is so hard vol. god knows i dont know anymore

“If you ever betray me, Lu Han, if I ever have to see your face plastered on a magazine next to a blond model slut, it’s over.”
this sentence !!!!!!!111!!!!!

Minseok being illogical and couldn't think straight when he saw the manipulated photo seriously just so...real, like obviously he want to believe luhan but when you saw something like you just...
It’s a pity that he didn’t come here before the breakup, he would’ve seen our together photos hanging from every ( ... )

aprilclash June 9 2014, 19:09:01 UTC

rest in peace MY poor heart

i'm so sorry you had to write such a long comment but i loved it, thank you. i really don't know what to say, i don't deserve all these praises /BLUSH/

charliebnim April 27 2014, 17:27:25 UTC

THIS WAS SO WONDERFUL ! GAWD <3 PERFECT TBH even if i'm sick and yuk, but i am so happy to read this :'

aprilclash April 27 2014, 19:32:50 UTC

ARE YOU SICK??? take care of yourself and heal soon please (*3*)

and thank you ♥♥♥

mehrainbow April 27 2014, 18:21:48 UTC

( ≧Д≦) Luhan was Minseok's female dog indeed. BUT GAHH!! TOO CUTEEEE. MAH FEELS ARE ALL OVER THE PLACEEE. Good thing they talked everything out and gahhh Minseok was so cute when he said he was waiting for Luhan. I absolutely adored Minseok's tsundere personality (Luhan loved it too). And the thoughts Luhan has when he's afraid of what Minseok might do is just so hilarious. And Luhan always asking Minseok to marry him and Minseok going "not yet, bby, not yet" and how they're still so hopelessly in love and scheming Luhan and naked Minseok and ughhhhhh. I CAN'T. (╥_╥) /incoherent/ I thought this was gonna be another unknown boy falls in love with suparstar fics, but their love started waaaaay before then. They were already together ten years before this started and uhuhuhuuuuu forever afterrrrr! And I was a bit miffed at Minseok's overreaction cuz I thought it was just a pic? Didn't realize it was like a kissing position, so Minseok's worry makes sense now. And when Luhan was about to leave, my heart was going NOOOOO. But good thing ( ... )

aprilclash April 27 2014, 19:40:38 UTC

you don't know how happy i am to receive this comment ;_____; i had a lot of doubts about this fic, the more i looked at it the more i gaaaaah and i feared that minseok was slightly bipolar and strange and not coherent enough. i didn't worry about lu han because there's only one kind of lu han, the one who's hopelessly in love with minseok, the one who's almost stupid by ho much he loves his baozi, so even if i make him stupid it's alright, but minseok always worries me, he's such a complicated boy. and i'm happy that the changes of pov weren't confusing as well and I'M HAPPY EXTREMELY HAPPY TO KNOW YOU LIKED IT /hugssss ( ... )

neitoperhonen April 27 2014, 20:04:39 UTC

This is amazing. The plot, the characterizations and style is really really good and easy to read. And I love LOVE Jongdae. Instead of this Kevin bitch, can't I have him? Cos I wouldn't mind supporting ManU (I'm Chelsea fan btw) for being close with the couple and well, KIM JONGDAE.

aprilclash April 27 2014, 21:46:51 UTC

i'm going to throw you kim jongdae just because you said you're a chelsea fan *O* i never really liked kevin aka kris anyway, better leave jongdae in good hands!!!

thank you /blushes/ you said i'm amazing, i'm gonna autocombust from the feels >/////

fukushimakyong April 27 2014, 22:11:46 UTC

THIS WAS SO PERFECT
OMG I LOVED IT SO MUCH

aprilclash April 28 2014, 20:21:13 UTC

awww, i'm so happy!

thank you for reading and commenting ♥