Their story; xiubaek

Apr 17, 2016 13:48

Title: Their story
Rating: pg
Pairing: Baekhyun/Minseok
Wordcount: 1400 words
Warning: male pregnancy, mention of abo dynamics, kinda unbetaed
Disclaimer: this is a work of fiction and any mentioned real people do not belong to me
Summary: Baekhyun is a pediatrician, Minseok was a single father, Sehun will be the reason they meet for the first time ( Read more... )

pairing: xiubaek, *fic:exo

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charliebnim June 9 2016, 06:31:31 UTC
This is so precious, how come I didnt know about this ??*

Thank you for writing, this was so so amazing

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aprilclash June 24 2016, 21:05:17 UTC
thank you for reading sweetheart ♥

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crizzycrazzy June 22 2016, 05:52:05 UTC
I'm not sure if it's your intention to make us cry but I did cos your A/N and that last paragraph touched my heart which I have not expected at all. I must say I crave to know more about Minseok and Baekhyun, like the actual events that happened that made them like each other (for the first time and everytime) but then again I figured this fic talked about their feelings (and Sehun's too) more than anything so I guess that's why stating them isn't necessary.

I'm definitely no expert in literary criticism but this style of writing is new to me and I like how refreshing it is to read something like this. I can easily categorize this as 'something special' on my list of fave fics. Great job!

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aprilclash June 24 2016, 20:49:26 UTC
I honestly didn't expect this fic to make so many victims (especially the girl I wrote it for, I was next to her when she started bawling and I blanked out bc I thought something was wong and it was just my fic lol). But I'm so glad people liked it, especially because it's written in a... kinda different way. Idek what to say but this isn't my usual style so it's more like an experiment and I'm relieved it turned out right <3<3<3

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kiki_bw July 5 2016, 13:34:15 UTC
this is so cute brb lemme wipe my tears of utter joy and happiness and xiubaek and baby sehun😭😭

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aprilclash July 5 2016, 17:04:16 UTC
baby sehun is so cute in my head *sob*

thank you for reading!

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mataariki August 1 2016, 19:13:12 UTC
Let me start by saying that I don't even know ( ... )

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mataariki August 1 2016, 19:13:27 UTC
Something in the way you place your words, or just the way you orchestrate the flow of the narration, is magical to me. It comes so damn natural. That's the thing that never makes the story feel off, because every single word flows like it was meant to in the first place, and it's never forced, never blindly studied. And it's not even about the ship. You could probably write a fic about a rock humping a stick, and that was it, I would still probably love it because I know the way you'd narrate it would be fantastic, just as ironic or tragic as it should be ( ... )

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cmrbubbles November 6 2016, 03:04:50 UTC
I'm in looove, this was just too sweet and beautiful *O* Thank you for writing it :)

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