dreams don’t happen when you’re asleep (they happen when you’re awake)

Apr 23, 2015 00:46

Title: dreams don’t happen when you’re asleep (they happen when you’re awake)
Pairings: Sehun/Jongdae, side!Chanyeol/Baekhyun, hinted Minseok/Lu Han, Junmyeon/Victoria, Krystal/Amber and Jongin/Kyungsoo
Rating: pg
Length: 91k~
Summary: Sehun trips into Jongdae’s dream and everything changes.
Warning: language, very brief mentions of torture

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pairing: baekyeol, pairing: sechen, pairing: xiuhan, *fic: fx, *fic:exo, pairing: krysber, writing: fic exchange, *fic: rv, writing: bday gift

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ochamint April 26 2015, 01:56:51 UTC

When I read this on the exchange I thought RIGHT WHO WROTE THIS I KNOW THIS STYLE and then after the reveals it was YES OF COURSE

HOLY HELL this was a really great fic. For starters, I loved the way you broke it up and also the way you included real and fabricated quotes (YOU LISTEN TO THORNAPPLE I LOVE YOU). It gave information to the story so smoothly, because you didn't have to explain it within the text and that can be really jarring if not done extremely well, I find. Kudo points for you.

And then the universe hnnnnnng I loved it. The world you constructed was so detailed and engaging. There were a lot of really fascinating elements and the best part was that it made a lot of logical sense - the way they tied together, the way people interacted within it...and the imagery was SO SHARP I mean I can see it and the whole atmosphere was tangible and all things good.

AND THE STORY ahhh how do I even with sechen and KAISOO AT THE END HOW COULD YOU LEAVE THAT THERE

All in all this was a trainwreck of a comment but thank you very much for writing this
Bless your perfect creative soul

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aprilclash May 22 2015, 16:56:30 UTC
I'm really potato at answering comments, waah. You know, when at the beginning I decided to do the initial quotes thing I didn't know it would've been so difficult. I left a lot of blank spaces because I didn't know what kind of information would've been more useful to the reader. The only thing I was sure about where the song quotes. I chose the title at the beginning and I tried to stick with the dream theme. And yes, I listen to Thornapple, but I have to thank my beta who translated the song and suggested me that quote lol.
And also thank you for saying you love the imagery oh god I was so worried it was too heavy and boring ;; and yes kaisoo wins. I really want to tell kaisoo's story, they deserve it!!

Buh, my soul is not perfect, nor creative, but it's really smug and pleased and happy now, thank you for this so-so-so nice comment /blows kisses/

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