The "hook" for statement of purpose
I'm apply for an MPH program and I'm freaking out about the statement of purpose! I've read so many samples and opinions of the intro or "hook" all seem different. It would be greatly appreciated if someone would take a look at him and offer feedback. I'm in the process of doing the rest of the SoP. Thanks in advance!
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