Yet another SOP problem...
Hi everyone!
I'm applying to do a PhD on Biostatistics and I have been having problems writing my SOP...somehow I just don't seem to find the right thing to say :S
I managed to write what I think may be a good introduction, but I wanted to get some comments on it before I keep writing!!!
Feel free to hurt my feelings if necessary!
Thanks a lot for your help!
PD: from that last period on, I intend to discuss my thesis results, further experience doing research on the biomedical sciences, and then get to explaining my future career and research goals and why I am a perfect fit for the program.
Taken down for editting, thanks for the comments!!!