Another SOP question

Oct 19, 2008 13:33

Right now, I'm having trouble making my essay not sound clunky and I continuously erase and rewrite to make it not atrocious. My problem is that I want to study two things that are not even in the same galaxy of related to one another (the justice system in North American arctic societies and game theory from a sociology and criminal justice perspective) and I can't find a way to make a good transition in my essay. What do you all suggest? Should I just pick one and run with it in the essay or should I make some attempt to relate the two? Should I just make a hard change of subject in the essay? I know you can only do so much without an essay to work with, but I'm just asking for generalities right now.
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