arashi, ohmiya. the colour of silence.

[applepluspie]

two things: one, i write too much ohmiya; two, i write too much linear and gap-filled fic. i have prompts to write, maybe i should get onto them.

the colour of silence
ohmiya, g, 630 wds.

Comments

[nicefinalbeam]

I think... oh gosh, I don't even know. The images you come up with... sometimes I feel like your fiction is a series of photographs.

I really love this. ♥

[honeypuffed]

dfkgsdfff your comment ♥ ♥

[jnessap]

damn it, lollipop craving.

nothing makes my day like totally subtle Ohmiya ♥

[honeypuffed]

i had two yesterday and one as i wrote this, so i'm pretty much set for life. doesn't mean i won't continue to eat one every day though.

♥♥

[jnessap]

I haven't had one in aaaages. /sadface

^^

[honeypuffed]

*squishes one through computer*

[rinalin]

HEE. I love the cute factor and how Nino's STILL nervous. Right up to the end.

[honeypuffed]

glad you liked it :)

[evolardnek]

Ah- Such a smoothing fic. You captured the scenes so perfectly it makes me wonder if it actually happened *suspicious look* Either way, its all so sweet. You should write more<3 :3

Ken-

[honeypuffed]

thankyou!!

[thefrug]

Seriously, everything about this one-shot was perfect to me.
From the imagery you build with all the people around Nino; to the silence of Ohno at the very end. Opting to kiss Nino instead of say anything to him.

Perfect. Well done.
<3
Shan

[honeypuffed]

i am so glad you thought so, because this is just one of my many ~write whatever as i go~ pieces with no kind of prior ideas or plans. so thankyou! ♥