Pushing Who: Happy-Go-Weirdy - A Doctor Who/Pushing Daisies crossover, chapter 6b

[applegrass_wolf]

“Pushing Who: Happy-Go-Weirdy” - A Doctor Who/Pushing Daisies crossover.
Collab between me and my friend Jess. I’ll write a chapter, she’ll write a chapter.

Title: Pushing Who: Happy-Go-Weirdy
Genre: Crossover, Mystery, Humour, Drama
Story By: Immy (applegrass-wolf) and Jess (thecakemaker)
This Chapter By: Jess (thecakemaker)
Word Count: 3,213
Disclaimer: Characters not ours, DW © BBC

Comments

[saku_teiki]

Oh my, shouting. I like this Maria character. I also enjoy how she makes Jack jealous. ^_~ I don't think many people can do that. Er, well, Ned makes Jack jealous. I think you know what I mean. I hope.

I thoroughly enjoyed the Doctor!nerds. XD And the fact that they got Bernard's name from his underwear...! bwaha

I love the descriptions of the Doctor's actions. They're so perfect! I wish mine were like that... No one's read them yet, since I haven't posted them, but still. ^_^ Poor Chuck, she's a pencil. :3 I can just see her confused smile.

Mmmmm, a Ned pie. I may have to use that in my story. Much later on, obviously, when the Doctor and Ned will be discussing pies and why some fruit have pies and others don't (like tomatoes and olives. Are olives a fruit? I don't even know... "The fruit is a small drupe 1-2.5 cm long, thinner-fleshed and smaller in wild plants than in orchard cultivars." A-HA! I needed to know that for my fic. Anyway). Mmm, Ned Pie.

Finally, I very much enjoyed this line: The Captain and the Pie-maker shared a look. (No, not that kind of look.) It was so epic and I loved it. Just the way they're referred to by their titles instead of their names and the added aside by the narrator... Lovely. :3

I'm probably forgetting something, but... oh well. :3 This is enough for now, I think.

[applegrass_wolf]

Yeah, I don't think many people CAN do that! so yay.

The underwear bit surprised me too xD

And I'm glad you thought that line was epic! :D thanks so much for reading & reviewing again :D

[saku_teiki]

You are quite welcome! I enjoy leaving feedback! Especially stream-of-consciousness feedback; I think that's the best kind. xD

I've just taught myself how to use GIMP; I may have to make a mini-banner for your fic once I finish mine. ^___~ I'm in the mood. xD