OC APPLICATIONS THREAD

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OC APPLICATION THREAD

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[INSTRUCTIONS];
  • Applications open 11:59 P.M. Sunday night, Eastern Standard Time. They will be open for submission purposes until 11:59 p.m. of the immediately following Sunday.

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    4/5 daisoujou March 31 2008, 04:48:48 UTC
    Sample RP: Through the network’s sea of data flew two entities. One appeared as a consortium of black dots that oozed forth in a chaotic, unpredictable, but speedy, manner. The other entity appeared as a flaming blue ball of light that hastily followed the black dots in a forward swaying motion. The fireball was Azure Kite and he was in pursuit of the dangerous anomaly known as AIDA. This particular AIDA had chosen to fuse with a quest NPC in hopes of further examining and infecting more human-controlled player characters. Because of this newfound intelligence in this particular AIDA, Azure Kite had mobilized in order to remove the threat of any AIDA based off of this one. They both passed through the boundaries separating the unseen data sea to the regular areas in [the world].

    The weather was fitting for the battle about to take place. The skies were dark and thunder was rolling throughout the outdoor field area. The AIDA had stopped for some unknown reason and while it should be discovered it was a secondary function at best. Azure Kite had to kill it now while he had the chance. “Haaaaaaaaauuuuuuuurgh….,” growled out the program as it drew its three-pronged weapon, Twin Fangs of the Empty Abyss and snapped the blades to the ready. The AIDA dots combined into one mass and took on the form of a koi fish. Both battlers were ready.

    The AIDA, now codenamed a -class, shot multiple beams out of its elongated body at the Azure Knight and the Knight floated out of the way of them. Azure Kite quickly moved in and began to hack and slash at the AIDA with his Fangs as much as he could before the AIDA whipped him away with its tail. Azure Kite then shot several light spells at the fishy AIDA before preparing for his final blow against the AIDA. The Twilight Bracelet came out easily, glowing orange as it charged energy to fire a lethal Data Drain at the AIDA. All was going smoothly enough for the Azure Knight.

    However, things took a turn for the worse as the AIDA targeted several players adventuring in the area. Azure Kite quickly tried to intercept the AIDA before it could harm the players, but it was too late. Forcing its way into a PC, the AIDA and the player character merged from a level of computer data all the way up to the human’s own mind. The infected character turned with malice in his eyes. His party members cried out, “Stop it! You’re scaring us! What are you doing?!” but they screamed in futility. The player was being controlled by AIDA, his own passions and hatred run amok within his brain. Azure Kite knew what it had to do. He floated down between the infected player and his party members and pointed his finger, summoning again the Bracelet. Without a hint of remorse or sadness, Kite fulfilled his duty by Data Drain the infected player. The AIDA was successfully destroyed, but the player character itself was destroyed too and furthermore the chance of the human player behind the previously infected character being put into a temporary coma was high. However, Azure Kite did not regret his actions. He had destroyed an AIDA and protected the stability of [the world]. Besides, the human would recover as his protection from becoming truly comatose was not broken.

    Ignoring the screams of terrified players, Azure Kite turned back into a fireball and returned to the network’s sea of data, awaiting the time it would have to act once more.

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    5/5 daisoujou March 31 2008, 04:50:09 UTC
    Sample post: (Due to being imcomplete, Azure Kite makes all typed posts in code, more specifically hacker or l337. Every post will have a translation due to this fact)
    3rr0r.
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    #0(473P r5P1m3n74r% n37w0r|{.
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    Translation:
    Error.
    Designation Azure Kite currently in unknown Root Town outside of [the world's] parameters.
    Attempt to contact Aura....failure.
    Scanning area....0 PCs detected, 0 AIDA signals. Multiple anomolies detected.
    Reviewing primary directives: Protect Aura. Maintain stability of [the world]. Eliminate AIDA. Eliminate Ovan.
    Beginning examinination of unknown area to determine threat level to stabilty of [the world].
    Located rudimentary network.
    Beginning to scan archived information commencing.......
    Location verified. Location is currently Root Town City.

    Aura, if contact with this message is made, please recall me to the regular parts of the system in order to continue my primaru directives. Programs designated as Azure Balmung and Azure Orca. If contact with this message is made, please locate me and await further orders.

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    REQUEST appfloss March 31 2008, 18:42:05 UTC
    Thank you for your application. However, it looks as through you're applying for a character from a particular fandom or series, and not an original character, but you've posted your application in the Original Characters Application Thread. Because this character has a significant amount of background and characterization provided, we think your application should really go in the regular Application Thread here. If you'd like your application to be considered for acceptance this app week, please repost your application there. If you think that this character should be applied for as an OC [Original Character], please contact a mod [messenger contact preferred] to discuss it. Thank you.

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