This was a great story. i loved the twist that Kara's father was one of another group of survivors like the Final Five and the fake out with Lee's death in the end was fabulous. I skipped to the very eend to make sure he lived in fact. ;)
As I was writing, I was thinking 'Man so many people are going to kill me for the Lee-supposedly-dying twist.' I'm all for those painful memorable endings, but I'm not writing for TV, so they get the happy ending here.
Thanks! And I'll probably be starting some smaller stuff or participating in some of the things the communities have going on now that my brain can stop thinking about this.
Oddly, I was almost ok with Lee being dead (although I had a hunch he was fine) because it was a satisfying story either way. But I don't mind a more tragic ending so long as it's satisfying and well played.
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I'll definitely be joining in over there, but first I need to work up the courage. I've been playing catch up this evening reading some of the things there and other new Kara/Lee fic since I pretty much shunned everything for the last few weeks. So much good stuff I missed!
Great job and you should definitely write more!
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Thanks! And I'll probably be starting some smaller stuff or participating in some of the things the communities have going on now that my brain can stop thinking about this.
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If you feel like writing something shorter here's a low stress option the_applecart 003 :D
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